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The Black Plague | 5 | 100.00% | |
*Troop* | 0 | 0% | |
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12-28-04, 05:54 PM | #16 | ||
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IP: 258C A279
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^W/e kid...'just because some1 voted for unexplained'...omg the shit was xplained..callin me a hater...bitch please...'u will never be better than me'...prolly not on how the way u erasin shit cuz sum1 doesnt vote for you yea...so like i said check yaself nigga...stupid herb..and stop sayin 'Nuff Said'..wackass saying..plus in our battle u said i copyied u wit the Lil Wayne Sig..that's bullshit lie played line from you..u know damn well i asked you to make a sig wit lil wayn on it and u stole the idea...so go on head wit that nonsense....
^tru Apoc
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12-29-04, 08:46 AM | #17 |
thug life
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This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
IP: 06B8 DBF2
yo u both weak as fuck
but ima go with black plague cuz troop u a foo nigga what kinda rap name is troop.. shiit atleast black plague admits hes a nerd with his gay name u actually think niggaz gonna buy a album from some fool called troop? hell naw nigga change yo name or quit rap busta PEACE BITCHES 2pac done spoken
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12-29-04, 01:09 PM | #18 | |
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IP: D135 D6AF
Omg....these kids in Fl are sumtin else...WHA KINDA NAME IS 2PAC..get off his nutz bitch...a white boy could rip pac...and my spit name is Jimmy Pocketz...u fuckin No body....who are u ne way.....No one...........Exactly..and Skriptz cant get mad cuz i merked u.....Nuff Said...
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12-29-04, 04:33 PM | #19 | |
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^ yea merked me by erasin votes...thats only way u can win...so fuck off mayn
.out.
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12-30-04, 02:53 PM | #20 | |
... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
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IP: 8FC2 0398
^^ Arite ya'll honestly stop bitchin at each other... this a battle thread not a beef thread...
Get some votes in this bitch
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12-30-04, 02:56 PM | #21 |
.::I Kill For Fun::.
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This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
checking the pollz but I thought blak won
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12-30-04, 02:58 PM | #22 |
.::I Kill For Fun::.
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo troop is a fucking pussy in everybattle he erases almost up to 10 votes, you mad pussy
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12-30-04, 02:59 PM | #23 |
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IP: CC3D AFAC
Voted For: The Black Plague
black plague got this one.. sorry troop.. he just had harder punches.. better personals... flow was off for both.. and structure could be better.. troop small font doesnt make ur structure good... and troop ur still doing comparisons and not punches. u need to work on that.. so black plague gets this one due to having better punches.. and he edged it on personals.. no hate to either.. i just think black plague edged this one.. good job to both.... pz
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12-30-04, 03:11 PM | #24 |
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IP: CC3D AFAC
Easily Advance Knockout Plague on Any Day.Stop playin Homo
Understand Black this"The Real World" and Im batteling Karomo ehhh decent opener.. needs more complexity 6/10 Portray of Teach vs Student can end Tragic in Raced for Harms? BlackMelt undaPressure like Flames Held Up 2 Plastic Braced Arms uhh im not really feeling this.. set up was weak. 6.5/10 This Deliverance from Hell..Has No Punches that of Thigh Know? Ya Truth Tank is Empty..Throwin Pure Blanks like this is Tai Bo has potential to be a great punch.. coulda been better 7/10 He Black? But turn Johnny Proper When..Fbi come wit the Raids Believe me This time u gettin Played. like .."Ray".. playin Spades ehh decent again.. u still need more wordplay 7/10 He Faded after Paramik & ReAppeared in my Efl Section wit Hate You gone Pull just as Much votes. as Bush did from Section Eight nah not feeling this.. again could be better worded... 6/10 Troop 32.5/50 Just look at ya past man, ya wack ass got zapped by a "ghost" rapper think you the shit homy but where's ya respect, when u got ripped by casper not a good opener but decent punch.. 7/10 And not just once, but twice man now ya “phantoms” come back to haunt ya Like a retard on a playground, after this emberassment ya peeps will tuant ya lmao.. funny shit... needs better wording though 7/10 Nice record you showin, wins in ya “wack noobs beat” column keep growin Then shabba went blowin smoke at you and ya wind pipe stopped flowin good personal.. your lines are stretched though... 6/10 Chokin you like bleach and amonia mixed up, now it got to ya thoughts Think you hard cuz u got RV money? Dawg respect can’t be bought decent.. too simple.. but hard hitting.. 7/10 When u first got on this site you had no idea what you was doin Asked for my help and I gave it, even let you in my crew and… dont like the unfinished sentence.. no punch.. needs work 6/10 This is how you repay me? Shit ain’t right, like allowin gay marriage Ya time is done son, you went out long ago like travelin horse and carriage lmao.. nice closer.. get job on this.. 8/10 Black Plague 41/50 just well explained so vote doesnt get dq'ed
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12-30-04, 03:14 PM | #25 | |
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IP: 7E48 EB29
Voted For: The Black Plague
Black got this but it wasn't exactly the easiest decision.....this was a GOOD battle.....Troop you had a nice verse but was you rappin out a dictionary? lol you had a nice verse.....almost enough to beat Black....nice verse....this was the most interesting battle i've voted on....and the hardest to vote on...i mean Troop came hard and came with everything and i think Black did too.....but Troop you didn't beat him Black everything in your verse was good...i mean it wasn't perfect but it was good.....punches were decent and it flowed very well good structure....some good multies.....metephors and wordplay was good but not the greatest...overall you had a nice verse Troop you had decent punches but not enough to beat Black....stretched lines but still was a good verse...multies and wordplay was nice.....pretty much the same as Black....but Black just came harder...yours flowed ok but Black's flowed better Overall a good battle.....only things that got Black the win was punches and flow.....simple as that....good battle keep elevating v/The black Plague I expect a returned favor with an honest vote on my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=167288 peace
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12-30-04, 04:24 PM | #26 | |
... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
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IP: 010E EA54
Uppin for some votes..
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12-30-04, 04:31 PM | #27 | |
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: DBCE DC18
Voted For: The Black Plague
Easily Advance Knockout Plague on Any Day.Stop playin Homo Understand Black this"The Real World" and Im batteling Karomo Setup was played & blah, punch was blah, I'm taking off more points cuz u choose to open wit dis...eh...1/10 Portray of Teach vs Student can end Tragic in Raced for Harms? BlackMelt undaPressure like Flames Held Up 2 Plastic Braced Arms Setup seemed promising but punch killed..u used ya simile completely wrong, made line wack...4/10 This Deliverance from Hell..Has No Punches that of Thigh Know? Ya Truth Tank is Empty..Throwin Pure Blanks like this is Tai Bo Setup was blah....once again horrible simile use...chill wit all da "likes"<---shit gets repetitive, an makes ya verses seem limited.....3/10 He Black? But turn Johnny Proper When..Fbi come wit the Raids Believe me This time u gettin Played. like .."Ray".. playin Spades Setup was terrible....punch was a decent try I'll give ya props for it even thought it fell short of what it shoulda been....5/10 He Faded after Paramik & ReAppeared in my Efl Section wit Hate You gone Pull just as Much votes. as Bush did from Section Eight Setup was wack an so was punch an its even worse cuz u used it as a closer, not impressive at all........3/10 overall: 16/50 Just look at ya past man, ya wack ass got zapped by a "ghost" rapper think you the shit homy but where's ya respect, when u got ripped by casper Setup was a decent personal, punch was blah...4/10 And not just once, but twice man now ya “phantoms” come back to haunt ya Like a retard on a playground, after this emberassment ya peeps will tuant ya once again good setup, blah punch...4/10 Nice record you showin, wins in ya “wack noobs beat” column keep growin Then shabba went blowin smoke at you and ya wind pipe stopped flowin fair setup, jus slightly above blah punch...5/10 Chokin you like bleach and amonia mixed up, now it got to ya thoughts Think you hard cuz u got RV money? Dawg respect can’t be bought NO NO...setup & punch wa sjus wack...2/10 When u first got on this site you had no idea what you was doin Asked for my help and I gave it, even let you in my crew and… This is how you repay me? Shit ain’t right, like allowin gay marriage Ya time is done son, you went out long ago like travelin horse and carriage a 4 line development punch<---if u gon do it make sure do punch is hard..which in this case it wasn't...3 line setup was like a story instead of a diss..an punch was jibberish...2/10 17/50 This battle wa spathetic on both sides....nothing even remotely ill came from either, troop had a bunch of wack similes an black plague just rambled about nothing...only difference was black's was a lil more personalized than troops...troop would just mention black's name in setup then foolow it with a wack generic punchline<----not a personal playa...black had some decent ATTEMPTS at personals<--they were wack but were actual personals so dats what helped him edge it out in my opinion..both y'all elevate an stay up.............1
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12-30-04, 05:14 PM | #28 | |
No Relation To Tina
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This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
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checkin polls............................................. .
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12-30-04, 08:00 PM | #29 | |
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Voted For: The Black Plague
LOL BLACK PLAGUE OWNED TROOP A WHOLE VERSE OF FUCKING PERSONALS HERE THE PHANTOM PLAY WAS CRAZY HERE THE WHOLE VERSE WAS JUST PERSONAL SHOT AFTER SHOT GOOD FLOW AND STRUCTURE AND VOCAB NICE A 8/10 TROOP GOOD PUNCHES BUT PERSONALS WIN BATTLES NOT PUNCHES GOOD VOCAB GOOD STRUCTURE TOO A 6/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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12-31-04, 12:36 AM | #30 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: The Black Plague
Aii this Is How i feel Troop you did good Mayne you did great But Your great and good jus wasnt enough.............I Like Ya verse its jus i have to go wit the better Verse out of the > TWO < so Im Gonna have to let ya know how i felt./...............Ya verse was Very hard to see at first so you might wanna fix that structure but ya punchez were kinda well weak NO HATE its jus how i feel all the rest was aii ............................Now RTF~RTF BP I Liked ya verse you came very strong and thats why you toke this battle by the damn tail and ran wit it .........................yo punchez mixed wit yo personlas was great But i didnt really see good excersise of Multi's but still I Liked ya verse yo came out and ya did ya thang and thats what i like to see ...................now RTF~RTF Now RTF RTF RTF RTF plz im Beggin RTF |
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