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Old 12-31-04, 02:18 PM   #1
ache
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Fed Up

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No hook needed, just read it.
Its an attention getter letter...
...to change for the better.
& feel welcome to feed it.

ache:

ya better throw up ya fists & fight for what its worth.
today on rap verse ya cant start a battle w/o beefing first.
its just the internet children, swallow ya pride.
this sites become intolerable, come on vets...open ya eyes.
ive seen nothing more than abraizing scores & ya still only check.
ya dont have time to punch some keys, but the vets still earn respect.
writing words down meant the world to me, memberin' when liquid poured
from my pupils, when i was actually glad to be on board.
some of you are so caught up, ya vote just to get a vote.
& the few that cheat personals, ya quote someone who hasnt even spoke.
its confusing how folks find net beef so ammusing.
i just wanna clench ya necks & stir ya head in a jacuzzi.
KLL is starting over, OT's blah. KOR is somewhat lovely.
but of all my entries, dukes throw punches when they know nothing of me.
ya haven't realized fibs and secret lies, are irriversable mistakes.
how do you expect to earn a candid vote when ya personals are fakes?
i just wish every member had the wits of vinci & was muggin like you troop.
but half the site has nothing to do with rap, like the five food groups.
i truely respect those rooks who desire my help.
cause they wanna progress & not retire themself.


verbal abuse:


its thousand five, the time for resolutions.
having balanced lives on the net...
...its time we bring out the blueprints.
alias stringin, trying to figure whom im connected with.
start off by checking off all those vets...
...on ya respected list.
cause im no one you know.

children listen, this is written in hopes you'll change.
quit kissing ass & start drifting back to the principle...vague.
everyones bearly above water, catch a breath.
stop net beefing so much and respecting less.
dont gimmie feedback if you didn't read it.
we all share a common interest, lets keep it.
crawl out of your selves & start to realize we...
...cant continue beefing, like morgan of super size me.
i have slums ducking more than the clutch in my civic.
all have issues. like kanye, "im just the first to admit it".
ya spit up ya pride, when ya should be getting insight.
ya like the blind playing tetris, ya not fitting in right.

those garbage text verses, aren't scaring people witless.
better off shutting down cpu...
...& helping ya parents with dishes.
cause ya wasting so much time acting.
its no wonder the drama is half what ya rapping.
so forget about fame & throw up your fists.
cause we bought to throw bows...
...like the pistsons & the new yorker nicks.

im so Fed Up.
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Old 12-31-04, 02:27 PM   #2
ache
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Old 01-01-05, 03:45 AM   #3
ache
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uppin.
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