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Doomsday has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 06:47 PM.

C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-30-04 06:50 PM.

'Fuck you at son?? You were on for a good 2 hours after you posted this shit and STILL couldn't come up with 6 lines??

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You rap's 'bum' you should write rhymes on a park bench
Well since you 'Doomsday'....i guess my lines is like Clark Kent!!
Since you 'D.C' no chance you could 'Marvel' the crowd
Ya punches like cheap dish soap.....watered down!!
Ya lines bout as 'Common' as that dude in ya avy
Cuz the 'Aftermath' is that ya chances 'Slim'mer then 'Shadys'


Exlanations-
1-his names doomsday clark kent is superman superman killed doomsday
2-doomsday is a d.c character the rival of marvel comics
3- he has common in his avy

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Drop Already Damn Bitch Wtf...........................................

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Yo fuck this lame bastard - Doomsday's famous from Rap World.
While your name backwards alone is tellin me that you lack words.//
I smack herbs - don't let SHIT slide - leave dudes broke in two.
While you were busy convincing them to cockslide and vote for you.//
Your biggest fan is Dopium man – and you stepping to me??
Said it your self Can’t Assemble Lyrics Intellegently.//

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I have common in my avy? I dunno if you noticed - but I have no avy son and never have, lol. Try again.

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

Real good battle
Heres the breakdown


open:Cali:"You rap's 'bum' you should write rhymes on a park bench
Well since you 'Doomsday'....i guess my lines is like Clark Kent!!" - This was pure class.. smacked him round the head with this hard personal punch! with a mad use of a metaphor.

close: doomsday:"Your biggest fan is Dopium man – and you stepping to me??
Said it your self Can’t Assemble Lyrics Intellegently.//" - I really liked wat you did with the name went down a treat!

It comes down to the middle verse really and this is the one i thought was better: "Since you 'D.C' no chance you could 'Marvel' the crowd
Ya punches like cheap dish soap.....watered down!!" -Fuckid wild! Metaphorically killed him and a hard personal punch.

It was the consistency that won it for Cali. Cos the battle was so short it was a case of 2-1 on bars and this was a very fair result i think. Good verses from both tho.

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Voted For: Doomsday

Damn........ decent battle... Doomsday i think took this battle tho, narrowely.... u had a nice flow to this and the begginin of every line with a multi helped the flow (example: I smack herbs, While you)... i like the flip on ur name u did... I lack.... prety good personals i think and punches

CALI had a great verse too but the flow was alil weird in this, u actually took it personals but that that closer was so weak and did not rhyme well at all..... if u had had a decent closer at all u woulda took this, but i heard that shit flipped so many times.... and the set up was ok, but in acuality "common" is unique as hell so w/e.... vote is Doomsday

Voted For: C.A.L.I

THIS IS AN HONEST VOTE NOT AN RV D/R...AND DATS WERD

Yo fuck this lame bastard - Doomsday's famous from Rap World.
While your name backwards alone is tellin me that you lack words.//
first line...do I care, self glorification is a , 2nd line quite cool and decent - 7.5/10
I smack herbs - don't let SHIT slide - leave dudes broke in two.
While you were busy convincing them to cockslide and vote for you.//
plaaaaaayyyyyyeddddd, CALI been dissed so much 2 beat him u gotta come up wid sum new shit ^^cos we heard it all b4 - 6.5/10
Your biggest fan is Dopium man – and you stepping to me??
Said it your self Can’t Assemble Lyrics Intellegently.//
first line..playyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeed, 2nd line is cool, decent punch -7.5/10

You rap's 'bum' you should write rhymes on a park bench
Well since you 'Doomsday'....i guess my lines is like Clark Kent!!
humour, wordplay, nice concepts, original - 7.5/10
Since you 'D.C' no chance you could 'Marvel' the crowd
Ya punches like cheap dish soap.....watered down!!
wordplay, originality, gd flow, an ok punch -7/10
Ya lines bout as 'Common' as that dude in ya avy
Cuz the 'Aftermath' is that ya chances 'Slim'mer then 'Shadys'
dis was an OHHHHHHHHHH moment, dis bar was niiceeee, original, bad ass wordplay in 2nd line, personal in first, both lines were punches dis shit was off da chain..dis bar ended the battle literally - 9.7/10-ill neva giv a 10/10

RTF - links in sig. Peace

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Voted For: Doomsday

Doomsday - Good spit, you had a good flow and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - Your biggest fan is Dopium man – and you stepping to me??
Said it your self Can’t Assemble Lyrics Intellegently.//

Worst Line - I smack herbs - don't let SHIT slide - leave dudes broke in two.
While you were busy convincing them to cockslide and vote for you.//

C.A.L.I. - Good spit, flow was smooth and punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - Since you 'D.C' no chance you could 'Marvel' the crowd
Ya punches like cheap dish soap.....watered down!!

Worst Line - Ya lines bout as 'Common' as that dude in ya avy
Cuz the 'Aftermath' is that ya chances 'Slim'mer then 'Shadys'


OVERALL - good battle here, both peeps came hard but I gotta vote for Dooms. He had the better flow and harder punches. CALI, your shit was good I was just feelin Dooms more.

Vote - Doomsday

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

Yo fuck this lame bastard - Doomsday's famous from Rap World.
While your name backwards alone is tellin me that you lack words.//
I smack herbs - don't let SHIT slide - leave dudes broke in two.
While you were busy convincing them to cockslide and vote for you.//
Your biggest fan is Dopium man – and you stepping to me??
Said it your self Can’t Assemble Lyrics Intellegently.//
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Ok nice personals, with punches. Good wordplay. Elevate much more on punches fam. Kinda came weak. personals was nice though. flow was good.


You rap's 'bum' you should write rhymes on a park bench
Well since you 'Doomsday'....i guess my lines is like Clark Kent!!
Since you 'D.C' no chance you could 'Marvel' the crowd
Ya punches like cheap dish soap.....watered down!!
Ya lines bout as 'Common' as that dude in ya avy
Cuz the 'Aftermath' is that ya chances 'Slim'mer then 'Shadys'
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ alright, good punches. nice personals. Flow of it was nice. Punches were good and decent. Personals Was good.




overall= This battle was close, nice flow from both end, and personals. The thing i look in a battle is who has more effective punches. Doomsday you had good punches, but still elevate. Cali your punches was decent and more hard hitting never "GLORIFIED" your self in your verse. Doomsday you'd did glorified yourself in the first line of your verse. That dont mean your punches wasnt hard hitting. I felted cali came harder with the punches with soem good personals too. Doomsday your punches was good, but i felted cali just came a little harder.

peace

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

Oh God...no fuckin contest here....C.A.L.I came wit way better punches and personals...Doomsday didn't come back bad, he had some funny lines...but C.A.L.I merk'd this kid wit better and more creative punches, a nice flow, decent structure...Doomsday, keep elevatin you got mad potential...werd...return the favor, links in sig...

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