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01-05-05, 12:25 PM | #1 | |||||||
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I'm Cursed............
IP: F2B1 8D50
i dropped this on two other sites,now i'm droppin here.
How can I ignore this rain,My hearts pourin' pain Soul's gone insane,desperate cries gone all in vain Conscience locked away,immobilized by hates ball n chain I hate to go against em so i'm dodgin' all the grains In hopes of piecin' t'gether my shattered dreams Abruptly corrupted at birth by genes,sorry that this is how it had to be I came to terms with this tragedy gradually,I actually Asked God to save me he sees it fit to wait gettin back to me Why can't I return this evil streak to the factory Emotions got me feeble,weak n breathin' unhappily Live in this relm of hell n the streets keep on strappin me I see no glimps of light in this tunnel,the futures the darkest shade of black to me I'm like Chucky dying to live in the flesh free of the battery Assault n robbery,rapidly wishin' cupid would clap at me Lift this devilish spell so I can joyfully experience Evil backwards......see(down there) EVIL..................backwards=.................. LIVE
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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01-05-05, 01:10 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 0825 899A
again another cool drop..................an great wordplay....................keep droppin dat hot shit bra...................
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01-05-05, 01:18 PM | #3 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 11AF 50EC
hey dis was a decent piece...lol wat am i talkin bout? dis was HOTT piece...hell yea WELCOME BACK tho 4real.......good wordplay, vocab, multis, punches, ect....yup n my man does it again..keep droppin those sick verses....9/10
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01-05-05, 01:26 PM | #4 | |||||||
***cITYSLICka***
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IP: F2B1 8D50
thx Lil C and tha unknown for the feedback.i tried to up my shit since the last time i was here.more feedback plz.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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01-07-05, 06:30 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 66C1 5E82
Deep. Man. I just left feed. Its geting slept on but this was a great drop. I liked the first line. Something like I would write. Good drop and RTF. Be sure to do that.
Here is my rating for it. 9/10 lol^^ But yeah peace.
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01-07-05, 06:33 PM | #6 | |||
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IP: DADF F7AE
u have 24 hours to drop a link with proper feed back or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871 |
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01-08-05, 08:35 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: E31B AA42
Close It...............................
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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01-08-05, 11:24 AM | #8 | |||
Classic
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IP: 28AD 5545
nice verse i like it a lot deep shit
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01-08-05, 12:05 PM | #9 | |||||||
***cITYSLICka***
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IP: E31B AA42
thanks black queen.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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