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01-11-05, 11:57 PM
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Tight.
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The intro and ending from valour owned. Seriously, it was all they're. Vocab was also they're and you developing your imagery, of how you perceived this topic, I quite liked.Alot.
50, um work your structure, try to lose the number thing, I might suggest, fully typing your words, I mean you do have poetic license, but don't get to pushy. /vote Valour. |
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