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01-10-05, 04:02 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: 9A80 AF2E
dat ok..........
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01-10-05, 04:07 PM
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IP: 9A80 AF2E
dat alrite except y u leave da freepost
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01-10-05, 04:09 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: 9A80 AF2E
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01-10-05, 11:38 PM
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a.k.a prozak
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IP: 9A80 AF2E
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01-12-05, 07:28 AM
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-The Shogun of the Dark-
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IP: D190 7D63
yeah, i feel what u saying about hoes and housewives, i know your structure wasn't the best but it didnt stop me enjoying what u wrote.
i got the gist of the chorus but if i was writing it i maybe would have put a lil more work in, but it wasn't bad tho! you should make a tune out of this verse. your style is good, i like it, it just need a lil polish, u know in the more technical aspects e.g. bars. i don't know why everyone is giving points out of ten, but... when in rome: ima give you a 8/10 keep up the good and RETURN the favour! thanks
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02-11-05, 04:40 AM
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IP: 5DA0 2C1D
hood dawg,,,,,,,,,i WANNA SAY ONE TING............ DAMMM U R RITE, I TOTALLI AGREE WID YA, SINCE IM A HOES WORST NIGHTMARE LOL, HATE DEM BAAAAAAD COZ BIN ROUN EM ALL MY LIFE................N E WAYS FUK DAT,,,, FEELIN YO SHIT.....WUD BE NICE IF IT WER A LIL LONGA
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02-11-05, 07:37 AM
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IP: F631 BFBA
yeah cool i'm surprised this even got feed this is one of my old ones
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