yeah, i feel what u saying about hoes and housewives, i know your structure wasn't the best but it didnt stop me enjoying what u wrote.
i got the gist of the chorus but if i was writing it i maybe would have put a lil more work in, but it wasn't bad tho! you should make a tune out of this verse.
your style is good, i like it, it just need a lil polish, u know in the more technical aspects e.g. bars. i don't know why everyone is giving points out of ten, but...
when in rome:
ima give you a 8/10
keep up the good and RETURN the favour!
thanks

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