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Cheerios has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-05 04:43 PM.

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-05 04:52 PM.

Cheerios's verses are written with chicken shit, cuz he 'carves in fear'
Like airplanes full of gay skydivers, i'm about To 'drop this queer'!
Men 'Rock' ya rear, makin ya feel hardcore With sword's stuck in you
My verse is like pornstars with virgins, cuz I'm bored 'fuckin You'!
He forces more "shit" on his drops than a fatman with constipation,
his multis ''lose more purpose" than the times he faked a masterbation
I'll give-em-heat when this battles done over, your sure to bitch-and-whine
all your skills are like 'mexicans', always below 'border-line'!
I'll make an example out of him, expose his "fake blackness"
He's a good lesson to learn from, as the definition of rap whackness//

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Yo i kno im pretty good the test yes i just passed shit
I Blow portions of ya 'booty' so ur verse
.........u defenetly half assed it
You got gats to blast off i'll light this task off and blow the track spot
This bitch is trying to prove she aint a man when her
.........breaths more furiocios than 'Shaqs' Cough
You whack off its ok gurl a first loss is all you need indeed
My rec's gettin Bigger cause its like its been 8 weeks
.........after planting a sunflower seed
my flows so hot so thats somthing im gonna have 2 teach
yes ur structure lookin freaky and weird like seein
......... Missy elliot in bikini at the beach

done hurry up and spit

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Voted For: Black Queen

nice battle here....but it was pretty easy to see who won.........

Black queen.........
1st bar-nice opener...hit hard....nice wordplay....good bar
2nd-lol....another nice bar...hit hard...good wordplay
3rd-decent...hit decent...overall just a decent bar
4th-lol....nice shit.....hit nicely
5th-hmm ok...prolly your worst bar....it was nothin more than an ok bar


Cheerios................
1st-nicely worded....good wordplay...just dont use all the dots...it fucks the structure up.....good opener
2nd-hmm...decent.....wasnt really feelin it that well...didnt hit too hard
3rd-blah....self glory...no punch
4th-it was and ok closer....nothin more nothin less


overall.................
black queen gets this easily because her whole verse was full of nice wordplay and good punches.....her punches hit a lot harder......and overall she just had a better verse.....nice battle.....black queen....please return the favor with a vote on my tag team battle....me n buddha vs cbo and dex....link in sig....thanks

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Voted For: Black Queen

u took dis shit easy mah.....ya first 4 lines were betta than his whole verse lol true story...cheer fam ya lines r 2 long how can u flow dat shit...

opener-black
structure-black
punchlines-black
creativity-black
multis-black
wordplay-nun
finisher-black..cheer u shouln't of spit dat line lol
enjoyed-black......her verse was all around betta nuff said..

return it ya'll links in da sig

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: Black Queen

Cheerios

Yo i kno im pretty good the test yes i just passed shit
I Blow portions of ya 'booty' so ur verse
.........u defenetly half assed it
-Not bad opener, only really using an ok punch, nothing more in it. 5/10
You got gats to blast off i'll light this task off and blow the track spot
This bitch is trying to prove she aint a man when her
.........breaths more furiocios than 'Shaqs' Cough
-Ok i suppose. Weak punch, using a metaphor but not really to great use. 4/10
You whack off its ok gurl a first loss is all you need indeed
My rec's gettin Bigger cause its like its been 8 weeks
.........after planting a sunflower seed
-Weak punch, didnt land and i wasnt feelin it at all. Sorry. 3/10
my flows so hot so thats somthing im gonna have 2 teach
yes ur structure lookin freaky and weird like seein
......... Missy elliot in bikini at the beach
-That is much more like it. Damn good closer i thought. Hard punch and landed. If only more of the verse could have been this good. 7/10


Black Queen

Cheerios's verses are written with chicken shit, cuz he 'carves in fear'
Like airplanes full of gay skydivers, i'm about To 'drop this queer'!
-Good opener. definately. Metaphor use with hard punch that landed. I was feeling this defo. 7/10
Men 'Rock' ya rear, makin ya feel hardcore With sword's stuck in you
My verse is like pornstars with virgins, cuz I'm bored 'fuckin You'!
-Quite cool. Ok filler, not-so-hard punch that definately landed but wasnt the best. 5/10
He forces more "shit" on his drops than a fatman with constipation,
his multis ''lose more purpose" than the times he faked a masterbation
-Ok i guess. Liked the set up but it was let down a little by the final punch. Seemed like a fake personal. 5/10
I'll give-em-heat when this battles done over, your sure to bitch-and-whine
all your skills are like 'mexicans', always below 'border-line'!
-Cool, liking this, quite a hard punch and it definately landed. 6/10
I'll make an example out of him, expose his "fake blackness"
He's a good lesson to learn from, as the definition of rap whackness//
-Heavy opener. You definately took this battle and using that closer just rubbed it in. 8/10


overall: Black Queen just came so heavier and much more clever. Right from the start there wasnt much of a contest. Good verse Black Queen

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Voted For: Black Queen

Aii This Is How I feel

Black Queen Takes This Battle bcuz if You Compare Their Bars Like Their OpeningS youll see that Black Queen Came ALOT much harder ......... and Her Punchez Hit alot Much harder ..... Came Sort of Nice wit The vocab BuT I Can See That Black Queen Takes This battle