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Drama Queen | 5 | 100.00% | |
THE_GAME | 0 | 0% | |
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01-10-05, 09:23 AM | #1 | |
Obscure Intelligence
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Drama Queen vs THE_GAME
IP: 4BD0 87AE
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01-10-05, 09:26 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
THE_GAME has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 09:26 AM.
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01-10-05, 11:52 AM | #3 | |
Obscure Intelligence
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
i'm in need of tha free drug's to keep me on my feet...
smokin got me where i'm goin... headin to tha point where i can't be beat... physical strain? wat is that? i don't think i get it... no...that's just medical... whenever i forget sh!t... this here is wat's good for u... i need it to survive... i got a job stressin me from 9 to 5... wit every puff n sniff... i lose my cares... can't get enuff of it... i need it to have a carreer... but wait... who r u... u lookin rather familiar... u holdin a sickle wit a grin... u must be my savior... this is fact... no such thing as fiction... watch ur back... or be attacked by addiction...
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01-11-05, 01:56 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 3BA7 496B
Drama Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 01:56 PM.
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01-11-05, 01:58 PM | #5 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: 3BA7 496B
The Spotlight
Center of attention,was always in the spotlight till that one night Her parents decided to have another baby which was to her delight That is until her sister arrived cause she wasn't number one anymore She tried to adore,tried to ignore but no one heard her helpless roar Her scream for love,a deep pain due to the loss of this natural drug But they sweep it under the rug,not caring about her cry for one hug Sat alone in her room,looking back at the good old times they shared Scared of what will follow and doubting whether or not they ever cared Terrified of becoming a failure,of letting everyone down once again Going insane with hatred towards her sister,she wanted to entertain Not that little perfect creature God created with stunning features The personification of an angel,divine virgin to all them preachers Decided to take fate in her own hands and handle this nasty situation Took a pillow and wouldn't let go,combination of hate and frustration Until she suddenly realized she was the one who caused this total mess Addicted to appreciation,always trying to impress,be biggest success She tried to release her sister but an obscure part kept on pressing When she finally finished her task,she sighed:"life's such a blessing" DQ
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01-11-05, 04:47 PM | #6 | |
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Voted For: Drama Queen
ok the game no good imagery or vocab here very sinplistic struture was off flow was ok but to win topicals you need imagery and yours wasnt there you just talked really and aint bring about no real vision 3/10 drama queen a little streched here but good struture made it easier to read much better vocab and a nice imagery also to it it gave a good story and picture which wins topicals i like the way the story constantly twisted and turned very good a 7/10
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01-12-05, 07:20 AM | #7 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: ADF9 F4E9
^Thanks for vote, upping this stuff...it's not that extremly long to read so let the voting begin!
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01-12-05, 10:00 AM | #8 | |
Obscure Intelligence
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
ya yall uppin for votes not much to read
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01-12-05, 04:33 PM | #9 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: ADF9 F4E9
And up it goes...
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01-12-05, 07:43 PM | #10 | |
[ a.k.a Os ]
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IP: F519 0F67
Voted For: Drama Queen
Drama Queen wins this hand down good job fromboth emcees but her imagery wasmuch better aling with everything else peace
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01-12-05, 11:49 PM | #11 |
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IP: B52C 6258
Voted For: Drama Queen
dq won this battle pretty easy. her verse was pretty on point. vocab was way better, it flowed a lot better, and there was just more of altogether. i was just feelin her verse more it was real thorough. get at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=169678
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01-13-05, 12:22 AM | #12 | |
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IP: 741E 10C5
Voted For: Drama Queen
This was close i honestly like both urs opener- DramaQueen Structure-DramaQueen Flow- THe_Game Punches-The Game Closure- DramaQueen I think they both were pretty good But DQ u got my vote because u put way more feeling into it I like that Good Job both of u
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01-13-05, 10:45 AM | #13 | |
Obscure Intelligence
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IP: 4BD0 87AE
ok uppin for votes got a felling that Os1ris vote was not long enough but drama if you dont like it you can deleate it its up t you
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01-13-05, 11:24 AM | #14 | |
Odi et Amo
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IP: BE51 9836
Uhm, it doesn't matter to me really...it's your call whether or not you think it's a dishonest vote or not...Thanks for the votes btw, we'll return favor for sure!
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01-13-05, 08:29 PM | #15 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Drama Queen
OMG Are You serious (to Game) OMG aii i gues I Have to Explain Myself Drama Takes This WHOLE ENTIRE BATTLe no sweat no Strain Bcuz Everythang Had Her Specail Swang and Im tired of explaning Myself on Blow out Battles............. Peace Im out |
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