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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-13-05 at 07:23 PM

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zero_instincts has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 06:53 PM.

Sovereign has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 06:54 PM.

man don't fuckin mess with me
cuz i know ur just a funkin wanna be
i know whea u live n whea u hide
sooner or later your gonna come to my side
cuz u know i can't be beat
but me n my bois'll kick u out
cuz all u can do is cheat
ur really stupid and thats all it about
i don't want no stupid loser to hide behind me
cuz ur ass is a rapper wanna be!

Its funny how he sucks cant complete any rhymes to harm me...
his birth was fucked up now hes commanding a premature army...
kid your lyrics are more generic then asians in accords & civics...
your punches directed nowhere, u've got the wrong x-y coor-dinates...
next time steal a minute to take back ya rhymes and see your faults...
coz your rhymes are childs play that should be locked away in disneys vaults...

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Voted For: Sovereign

Sovereign u got this hellla EZ
Opener- Sovereign
Flow- Sovereign
Structure- Sovereign
Punches- Sovereign
Multis- N/a
Personals- (none of u really had any)
Closure- Sovereign
Enjoyment-Sovereign
(return the favor)
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post1892808

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HITMAN INC MOTHAFUCKA

Voted For: Sovereign

whoa u got this for many reason accual lines punches effort and juss for putting 1 rhymes u zeroinstincts need to elavate alot homie and u need longer lines a kno u new to rap but try to elavate more

Return the favor PLEASE

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=170979

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

Voted For: Sovereign

do I even need to break it down? sigh...
open and closing: sov
punches:sov
flow:sov
overall:sov

Advice to zero, just... leave the site.. that's the worst attempt at a battle I've seen on this site so far, but not bad sov, would appreciate the return feed on my battle vs assassin(check sig)

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Open Mics

Stealth vs. Ass-as-Sin

aiight.....uppin..................................

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Voted For: Sovereign

*sighs* Wat is RV coming too??

I dont think i have to explain this, but the vote will get disqualified so here's the breakdown:

Sovereign- Nice drop, good vocab and hard punches, noway in hell he should get a vote!!!

Zero- *sighs* keep tryin...ummmm i dont know, go to the tutorials and study them like homework

vote goes to Sov. hands down

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Eazy Duz It Bitch...or get Popped

look at you messin with a noobie just like me
u think ur hot u think ur kool
makin up shit to show all that u rule
but man grow a dick and earn some balls
cuz this noobs gonna rule them all
and don't try a dumb come back with gang lik jcc n mods
cuz ur the lil kid who gonna get his ass wipped by the one and only
now listen to me u lil wannabe and learn some real shit but don't try n copy my styles
or i'll bust ur ass lik chicken wild
now im the boi whos got no instincts but all ur rappin just really stinck
Yea my name is zero and i battle along with the flow
oh and heres a reminder or somethin to let u know
what do u think tryin to beat me and gain some name
but bitch i too can play ur stupid game
so back off and let me go or i'll bust out some tae-kwon-do
with my bruce lee blood i'll rap just lik jin
sooner or later u'll know whos gonna win...

uppin.............................................

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