Battle Rules:

4-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
chekin 30 min
due 40min

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-13-05 at 07:59 PM

Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in.

J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 07:39 PM.

Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 07:58 PM.

|Get hit-wit-“Nines” like Toy R Us at Christmas-time | Gettin’ “Hacked” in a “Wizard Jersey” is da only time you “Rip-a-Mike”!!
|You as bitch as tits-an-clits-combined | Have ya “ass” sticked-wit-crucifixes-of-Christ to get ya “Shit”-Devine|(dammmnnnn)
rippppinnin......
GASSIN FLAME til u CATCH ABLAZE / ur gone in tha wind i’m jus scattering ur ASHES AN UR LAST REMAINZ ///
rippin ur visions is my *tradition* bitch i CUSTOM*EYEZ / Verse wud love to hold mah dick so he can say he CLUTCHED A NINE // FUCC YA RHYMEZ / people wudn’t come to see what u got *in store* if u posted an *OPEN SIGN*!! / an Freez giving u a ‘L’ like playing *chess* when u *JUMP WIT A KNIGHT*! ////
murda.....
can't TEST THA SMARTZ *infra REDZ* WILL SPARK, i'll have u *curled over tha "dot"* like a *QUESTION MARK*! // dese quotes corrode Verses as i DISECT EM APART / i'll throw ur *organz* in the *atlantic* so u can *flow* wit *DEPTH* AN *HEART*! ////

Dude's Nervous, Stripped His "ROD" Like Curtains Man, Freeze Ur Worthless?...
Prolly, Cuz I Spur Through This "Ice Man" Like His Name Was George Gervin*
Lol...Check His Sig...Dukes Says He Titer Dan My Baby Sis, Well Guess What? She's Loose
Dis Guy's Been Used ....Ill Scream At Him Harder But I Found Out He Cant Take "Verbal Abuse"*
Flow From Far, Steamin Like Mars, Havent U Heard Im Known To Own "Flamin Barz"*
Dat'll Melt Yo Ice In Ya Sig, U Braggin At A Star Cuz U Ten And Four?...lol
Ya Cant Hol Me, Ya Name Alone Signifies That U Dont Spit Fire
Ur Game? It Expired...Time to Perspire.... Come Back Wen Ur Rank Is Higher

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San Antonio had a great legend named George "The IceMan" Gervin
Verbal Abuse KO'd dis dude
I Beat Flamin Barz

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

JR freeze Nasty ass verse but it will be better when ur structure is good u kno how to fix that u need a trip to the tutorials any ways u had all tight ass lines i liked reading it from head 2 toe but what messed u up was like when u was sayin DAMNNNN and shit like that threw u off task work on ya struc


Notorious Verses
u had that 1 line that blew his fuckin lid off that george Gervin line was to ill lol
so ur structure wasn't as bad but it was bad and sum of ur punches didint hit as hard but u get this 1 by far from me

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

Voted For: Notorious Verses


Wow Nv Had Some Decent Shit I Liked His Better.........
Openor=Nv Jr Didnt Rhyme
Punches=Nv,Some Hard Hittin Punches
Personals=Nv,Some Decent Punches Not Tha Best..
Strukture=Nv,Jr's Wass Hard Ta Read At Some Parts
Vokab=None Yall Need Ta Up Ya Vokab
Closer=Nv,His Wass Ok,Ok Punch Good Shit........

Nv Came Harder With Tha Punches,Personals And His Strukture Wass Easy To Read.................


/V NotoriousVerse...........

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

N V
you had several multies to go along and make this nice verse flow good
you used pretty strong punches pretty strong personals you used good vocab
also
Flow From Far, Steamin Like Mars, Havent U Heard Im Known To Own "Flamin Barz"*
Dat'll Melt Yo Ice In Ya Sig, U Braggin At A Star Cuz U Ten And Four?...lol

^^^^^^^^your whole verse was great except for this bar^^^^^
you kinda fell apart there but for the most part ur verse was nice 7/10
jr freeze
not being mean but ur verse was kinda wack...your structure was terrible and you used weak personals and weak punchlines
work on structure and flow multies and punchlines/personals
ur verse was a 3/10
worste ive seen in a while
sorry
my vote..............obvious

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

I VOTED FOR U ONLY CUZ I COULDNT UNDERSTAND JR I UNDERSTOOD WHEERE NV CAME FROM

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IAM RICH-Nytch,iam a real big Tyma