hmm paramik your verse was dope... vocab just enough there... imagery was pretty good... emotion was definately better than VA's... you were pretty consistent... everything fell into it's place.. and you followed the topic better

overall :9/10

verbal abuse: i think everyone voted for you because of the amazing wordplay which i found good also, but i dont think you wrote the topic as well as paramik... he got deeper and more emotional with it... yours did also but not enough to get my vote... the vocab wasnt too great but not bad.. good imagery good consistency.. structure was decent for the most part but para got this one

vote: paramik

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