I was bored so I thought I'd drop something right quick..

Call me prince Charming-Bitch
More hot than The Elektra and other Carmen-Flicks
Serving more herbs than street Pharmicists
Knockin' cats out faster than 1000 Sleepin'-Pills
Sneaky like a leopard, the way I Creep-N'-Kill
Like cancer patients, Im Sick-Wit-It
What I say I Stick-Wit-It
Grab ya bitches pussy and stick my Dick-In-It
I got ya'll in Deep-Clog and don't ya'll See-Dawg
That Im performing better hiphop than games of Leap-Frog
Bitches, Im Dating-'Em and bustas, Im Fading-'Em
Splitin' more domes than the Cowboys Stadium
Looking for death? Than Follow-My-Clips
I Call-On-My-Grips so you can meet my Hollow-Tip
Violent when I Fight-Cats cuz I Ignite-Gats
Blast you in the dark and redefine Night-Cap

it was ok for a bored open mic homes I give ya a 6/10 on this one just keep workin on ur multis and vocab and you will be fine peace.

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vs super

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...918915&posted=1

look need feedback on my post cats won't peep and respond

I'm a guy bazaar wanna buy a car// applied my bank account used a specified amount// now a blank butt and bankrupt car won’t crank up// can't purchase a sandwich the damage is done now my credit is pathetic//

as far as multies goes this was a low mark on a scale from 1-10...three syllable multies ain't that advanced main...sorry


but keep 'em coming

^shut up hoe.

This site is full of little kids. You all obviously don't understand punches. SMH.

Anybody that understands punches wanna drop feedback?

2.3/10................................................

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you said mad multi's and ur tlakin bout punches whoa 2.2./10.

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