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View Poll Results: Skriptz vs Hip Hop
Hip Hop 2 28.57%
Skriptz 5 71.43%
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Old 01-18-05, 08:01 PM   #16
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wackass Zeke removin votes...

uppin this shit
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Old 01-19-05, 07:47 PM   #17
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The Fuck Kid, You Want To Start SomeThing??? I Aint Bin On Since I Droped This Battle So How I Removing Votes
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Old 01-19-05, 07:53 PM   #18
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Stop Lyin Homo Ass Nigga You Always On You Jus Put Dat Invisible Shit On So Nobodi Can C You Fukin Prik Ass Pussi..................
 
Old 01-19-05, 08:02 PM   #19
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Lmao...Kid Stop Flapping Your Gums I Aint Bin On, Aks Anybody I'm Cool With On Here Why The Fuck You Think I Aint Bin Posting Dumb Ass, I Aint Dumb Either Kordozar Aka Exponent
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Old 01-19-05, 08:11 PM   #20
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^Lol...dont think u have been exposed too d/a...

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Old 01-19-05, 08:13 PM   #21
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Don't Matter Kid, My Name's Zeke Uhm Him EyeDentity And I.D.
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Old 01-19-05, 08:30 PM   #22
ContagiousVenomz
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Old Ass Sht I Siad I Was Exponent Way Bak Aha You Pissed And You Got A Ugli Ass Girlfriend................
 
Old 01-20-05, 12:39 PM   #23
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up..............
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Old 01-20-05, 06:45 PM   #24
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Voted For: Hip Hop

Normal Punches-Hip Hop, you got this, but barely. Penis punch? Dawg you are better than that. Work on better material for your punches. Skriptz, you punches were weaker and that was why you lost this. I felt you stayed at the same level, but it wasn't as strong as Hip Hop's.

Personal Punches-Skriptz, got this. Not the best one, better out there. Everyone knows his old names, so not that hard hitting. HipHop, only had one personal, and rather weak. Using names is bad because some kids could consider the kid dope.

Metaphors-Hip Hop, not the best out there, but not bad either. Work on your material. Skriptz, not that many there, and the ones you used were rather weak in my opinion.

Multiple Rhymes-Skriptz, you had them. Ok multis, but felt forced to me, but that's just me. Hip Hop, no multis.

Structure-[b]Hip Hop, barely got this, but you didn't have all the ......... Skriptz, fell off horribly. I hate the .............. fillers.

[b]Flow-
Hip Hop, ok flow. Fell off a little bit in the middle, but overall the punches helped it keep going. Skriptz, good until the end. Just fell off too much.

Word Play-Hip Hop, had it. Skriptz, no wordplay.

Hip Hop, not your best verse, that's for sure. Overall use more personals and throw some multis in as well. Put more wordplay in your verses too.

Skriptz, not a bad verse, but punches weren't as strong as Hip Hop. Work on your personals and your punches. Your pink shirt punch was weak because a lot of people said straight pics. Throw in some wordplay as well.

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v/Hip Hop

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Old 01-20-05, 07:25 PM   #25
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Voted For: Skriptz

Skriptz:
well you had very limited wordplay here...
but you're flow was good and structure was also
which was refreshing since so many people have
streched lines it hurts me to read them...

speaking of streched lines..


Hiphop...
yo man,you gotta make ur shit flow!!! pleeeeaaaaase
your wordplay was played like...wordplay
^that was less played lol...fix your flow please
it really killed tthis battle for you..elivate a bit
go to cyphers and such... but

skriptz..win
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Old 01-20-05, 07:36 PM   #26
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Voted For: Skriptz


Your Skill Is Compared To Retarded Kids In Advance Math Classes
Enchance~His Punches, It'll Still Be Fuck Like Bush's Plan For Taxes*
^^decent punch....coulda directed it to him more
Kid, You Couldn't See Me 2 Inches Away With Three Inch Thick Glasses**
Kid's Dumb If I Give Him The Pass To My Account, He Still*** Couldn't Access
^^didnt have end rhyme....weak punch
Emotional Gangster When Kordozar's On He Get's An Erection In His Penis
Coz On The Mic He's The Only Kid That Call's Skriptz An Lyrical Genious
^^good punch and personal
Kid You Defeating Me, Is An Imaginate Scheme Like Disney Pictures
Skriptz Splits, Coz His "Skipt-ure-z" Are Pre Schoolers Pictures***
^^lil self glorify but 2nd line brought it up some

aight you had a pretty decent verse.....your structure wasnt too great...some of your lines were stretched...........you had better vocab than skriptz.....but your punches weren't really too directed at skriptz......should work on that....you flow was good...saw some multi's...

Your rhymes are still wack, like a doormat, they’re flat
It’s like you having a pink t-shirt, kid, just go take it back
^^decent punch
I stay defiant, that you leave tracks of bullshit when you stay walking
Your showered with abuse kid, cause I spit when I stay talking
^^nice wordplay.....good punch
This herb said he retired, so I guess that means he’s back
This fag has to make new names, just get a high rec...
............................................but it still means your wack*
^^good personal/punch
Beating me...u have a better chance if u cheat…
......................got a 0 chance of having me beat
No chance defeating me…like a gunman going to a showdown...
.................................................w ith no heat
^^lil humor in this punch......good punch

you had a pretty solid drop........your punches were good......you had good personals........your vocab coulda been better........but you added wordplay and had some multis.......which made you flow better.......your lines weren't stretched.......and you had better structure....

v/skriptz

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