hahaha nice pm man rambo u funny as hell if u wanna battle set it up mayne

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Ok..........
Uppin.
Come on ppl just put this one away. Sheesh.

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Ok. What the fuck? Uppin. Can we plz get some more votes? holy crap....

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Uppin.

omg. someone plz vote

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Voted For: Rambo

My vote is for Neptunes.

Ya punches were kinda good, but the strcuture was a lil off. I can tell that you rap fast, but this is a text battle, and you may have to switch it up a lil.

Rambo, ya structure was decent, but you gotta step it up. Ya punches were decent at best, and ya personals weren't half way decent. You really gotta step it up.

My vote is for Neptunes

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God Bless The Dead

Goddamnit dood. You gotta vote under the verse that you want to vote for. Holy shit, people need to learn how to do this. Is there a mod that could fix this plz?

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Uppin so hopefully a mod can see. and ppl need to vote. Correctly this time.

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checking this shito out............................................... ....

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

Voted For: Rambo

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to NEPTUNE flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, RAMBO had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


-Please return the favor on my battle
I know its a lil weak but its ok
Please return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680

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Uppin, this shit has been going forever. Plz somebody just vote and finish this!

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Voted For: Rambo

Voted for Rambo

Gave this one to Rambo but not easily i liked both real good but I found Neptunes punches a lil humerous and not hard i mean i laughed after i read some of them but wit Rambo i was like whoah so everything else was good

flow was a lil more easier to read on Rambos as well

Good Battle to Both
take a look at my battles n hook me up on my battles or sumtin!

Voted For: NeptuneHurricane

opener: neptune hurricane
vocab: nept
structure: rambo
punches: nept
multis: nept
overall: nept

neptune gets my vote

Uppin.
If someone would finish this up, we could move on. This battle is so old. People is sleepin.

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Voted For: NeptuneHurricane

Nept- Punches was ok, flow was fucked......Strucuture is fucked......Punches though was ok....i like the closer...aint nohting to say about your verse, except elevate on structure.





rambo- Punches was ok , still need elevation, flowed pretty nice...aint nothing much to say





overall=This battle was weak, Rambo you flowed an pretty good verse, punches was ok...keep doing ya thang, add multi'z next time. Nept you had an pretty bad flow, punches on the other hand (the closer) was nice. Rambo sorry fam but nept closer beat you. You had some fillers in your verse saying "partna" the same time. Punches was ok,nept punches was hard hitting and effective (the closer)

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