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01-22-05, 06:51 PM
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Herb
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beats ok a lil repetitive...delivery needs alot of work noth enough emotion..flow is choppy work on making it smoother punch lines r excellent but dont mess up ya flow homie...needs more similies better flow more word play better multis and metas too
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01-22-05, 07:29 PM
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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eh... wasn't really feelin' beat. Quality wasn't that good. Yo lyrics were good. Nice multi's. Yo flow was aiight, could be upped a lil tho. Lyrics were aiight, you could prolly make them better tho. Jus up yo emotion a lil and you'll be aiight. 7/10 pc
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