http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1908516

your aim is off punk cuz your bullets just missed us
when it comes 2 death there's no need 2 assist us
we know when the time comes, you'll be bringin more heat
no need 2 get excited kid, we're on the same street
2 feet got u 2 where u are today
and 2 glocks shot u and now your body lays
dug up in the dirt 6 feet under the ground
im sinister with a silencer - killin sound
your position's been filled, i got skills to fit the bill
so ill, i don't need steel to empty any tills
i spill raw emotions that spark mind over matter
you best batter-up before your organs start to scatter
for goodness sake, i caught u jumpin on my pump fake
it's kinda late for teachin so im forced to demonstrate
how to play in this game and keep your fuckin head straight
visions of paradise, as your eyes begin to dilate
and now you've been drafted, you'll learn that the fact is
half of these rappers never showed up for practice
and you cldn't reach my level once i mastered my speech
everest got nothin on me if u wanna test my peak
an avalanche of rhymes knocks the globe into oblivion
leavin me to stand, one woman out of a million
i control the orchestra, conductor of it's energy
just try to hold me back when the mic is right in front me
and suddenly, everything around turns against me
allies multiply now converted into enemies
quit tryin to play so brave no way to stay unscathed
no matter what you say to this day i remain unphased
i'm a rat in a maze stayin alive to be fed
when your hangin by a thread most would put their hopes to bed
but i'll survive, stayin alive with my grammar
that got enough authority to throw you in the slammer
cuz i know what matters when it comes droppin ill
rhymes that intertwine around your spine and give u chills
some cats say where theres a will there is a way
but you'd better hope their wrong otherwise your gonna pay
and now u've been rejected there aint nothin left but sorrow
thats what u get for thinkin my words were there to borrow

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AAAAAAGGGHHHH! This was killer

Honestly the best word - smashing. Im pretty much at a loss for words but il try and explain your greatness:

Your vocab is always a high level.

Your metaphors were fitted in so nicely and very cleverly.

Tasty wordplay and multis. -Fucking heavy.

The flow was cool, easily readable, the structure was cool too.


I am a big fan of this piece. Much love to you girly, im glad we reppin the same crew.


Lines that stood out:
"and you cldn't reach my level once i mastered my speech
everest got nothin on me if u wanna test my peak"

"cuz i know what matters when it comes droppin ill
rhymes that intertwine around your spine and give u chills"


-Was obviously more but i didnt want to list all of them


WE gotta hook up for a collab next week. Maybe mon or sun if you down?

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good job i guess i can say fam...sorry for the beef while back but you know just crew battlin...your drop right here was pretty dope had ill multis and word play, good flow, good structure, and vocab...big ups and my favorite line was

"cuz i know what matters when it comes droppin ill
rhymes that intertwine around your spine and give u chills"

i give ya a 9 outta 10

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thx fam fo da feed

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uppin please leave feedback people ill return da favor

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uppin..........

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dope nice punches and disses not the best i seen from you but still good

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uppin..........

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Nice Drop Queen I was feelin that one that shit was tight as fuck. overall a 9/10

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HAHA pure wackness!^

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shit was off the hook no doubt, fire. Good Vocab but even better idea and flow. Great piece good drop. peace

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The One and Only

uppin on feedback

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Seen better from you but still...this was solid drop girl! Was definately feeling your flow, vocab n structure were straight to the point. Had mad hardhitting punches/disses in there, good wordplay, creative shit...

Keep on dropping...good read...

DQ

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thx fo da feed DQ

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damn ma dis was fiya right here.Im thinkin about nominating dis verse of yours cuz dats how hot it was...Wordplay was tite..Structure was easy to read..Flow was killa..Had nice punches prolly a lil to nice...da word for dis piece is BANGIN..fa reals..good job...

~Assas-Sin
Mayor of T.G~