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Old 01-21-05, 10:33 PM   #1
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"Goverment Love Loss"

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"Goverment Love Loss"






















[HOOKx2]
U.S. stealing from their children, brothers and daughters....
.......My mother and Father, damn cant take it no longer
politicians dont beileve them, they just huggin' in public.....
.......just a love loss of faith, in this strugglin' goverment






















[Course 1]
See the money isnt werkin', and the struggle is hard
pops searchin' classifieds, just to muscle a job
They abusin' him now, they aint loosin' him now
from card tables to bar tables, boozin' him out
and he choosin' it loud, screamin' top of his lungz
he acknowledge he done, to wife daughter and son
there it goes once again, they got another one god
please tell me why its money problems all that we got
moms cooking in kitchen, screamin, shook and she bitchin'
Goverment in minutes, switchin' from crook to defendant
so mow its telephone harrasment and them lawyer bills
and the glory feals fake, when the storys real
fights with mother gittin' louder, and my sisters depression
lost in system, so just listen cuz this is aggression
late on payments for bills, medication and more
no money for court, a knock, citation at door


























[HOOKx2]
U.S. stealing from their children, brothers and daughters....
.......My mother and Father, damn cant take it no longer
politicians dont beileve them, they just huggin' in public.....
.......just a love loss of faith, in this strugglin' goverment


























[Course 2]
adds in newspapers, evection notice in mail
showin' us hell, dually noted, exposin us well
I.R.S.'ll hunt you down, dued fight to the death
its pressure up in court, fealing a slightness of breath
lawyer office arguments, not thinking with reason
extra talks with god, puttin' a price on beileving
knowing it hurts, power off, phone doesnt werk
so I hustled a lil' bit, but on the corner got jerked
now my mom trippin' out, she dont know what to do
its the system she doubtin', shes just lookin' for truth
lost our very first home, now were selling possesions
so we fell in this mess and now they tell me dont question
try and surpress your agression, wit the tools they got
with rules and laws, and control, with rules of thought
the case they shoved it, our misery, they lovin' it
so put ya finger up, and scream fuck the goverment

























[HOOKx2]
U.S. stealing from their children, brothers and daughters....
.......My mother and Father, damn cant take it no longer
politicians dont beileve them, they just huggin' in public.....
.......just a love loss of faith, in this strugglin' goverment


























[Course 3]
no home, no car, and no health insurance
evil power struggles, wealths only deturrent
broken heater buttons, so its cold in the winter
knowin' i'm bitter, never cheat, i've chosen to shiver
the schools liberal history, its teaching us wrong
its just general misery, but they preaching it strong
statesmen just easing it along, miss guided facts
they lies in fact, that polititians supplied in past
but thats our tax dollers for us, cant you see it
The man, stands conceeded, but still cant beileve it
then they repeat it, still we elect them to office
not a large margin between the wins and the losses
knowin' it costs us, I'm loosin' trust in my goverment
Destroying our homes, and theres nothin' to cover it
see my curiosity becomes, a deceitful sickness
just legal victims, in this twisted little legal system





























[HOOKx2]
U.S. stealing from their children, brothers and daughters....
.......My mother and Father, damn cant take it no longer
politicians dont beileve them, they just huggin' in public.....
.......just a love loss of faith, in this strugglin' goverment



























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Old 01-21-05, 11:01 PM   #2
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Old 01-21-05, 11:12 PM   #3
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Old 01-21-05, 11:17 PM   #4
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nice, flow was on point good topic kept me interested it a good sit back and think drop vocab was ight nice drop ...please return fav. "too fresh" on the open mic ..peace
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Old 01-22-05, 02:17 AM   #5
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nice drop mayn.....flow was pretty decent here
good topic on what u picked on here, but overall the vocab
was nice too...overall nice drop mayn...keep doing ya thing

8.9/10

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Old 01-22-05, 02:36 AM   #6
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flow was decent
ya flow carried it
nice perfect structure
nice subject
kept on pace and focused
overall it was a nice depth drop
need more like this
could use a lil more multis and vocab tho

7/10
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Old 01-22-05, 03:40 AM   #7
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Flow!!!

this has one of the best flow's I have seen dropped for a while.
Nice lyric's.stayed on topic. Its a good solid original peice.alot of truth behind this as well.
good drop.
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Old 01-22-05, 07:59 AM   #8
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mayne it was hotness.....word-ociousness-dociousness brutha (<<<drunk talk.....hahaha).

for real though...i thought that you got down. do it like only a true crhymie can playboy.......... educate 'em all, lol. <<<really though.....(im serious). the topic was cool and your position on the current state of things was apparent. the lyrics were clean and precise.......the structure was on point.......the flow was nice and steady............and the vocabulary was somewhat extensive. good job crhymie. keep up the good work pimp.

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Old 01-22-05, 06:41 PM   #9
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Old 01-22-05, 07:07 PM   #10
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yeah this had a real good flow to it..
lyrics were pretty good also especially if this was a audio drop..but still nice
vocab was pretty good also..
overall nice drop man
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Old 01-23-05, 12:10 AM   #11
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Old 01-23-05, 02:36 PM   #12
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ups and thanx for the feedback.....homie's
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Old 01-24-05, 01:21 AM   #13
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made me think of shit 2 Pac would write.....i loved this.....nice flow.....nice vocab.....structure.....you got your point across.....i'd have to give it a 9/10.....
Them fucking idiots really think nothing of our troops dying for something they grew up loving
fuck Bush and the government.....corrupt shit.....fuck the police man.....i loved that shit
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Old 01-24-05, 03:46 AM   #14
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this was a cool drop - your flow was decent - but your structure was good - you kind of lacked multies and vocab - but other than that - pretty cool drop - 7/10
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Babylon - you did Government Love Loss - check out my sig and give me and c-bo feedback on our diss we did to Twizted Government
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