Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Check by a hour, drop in a hour.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-24-05 at 05:49 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

gotaasswhoopin4u has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 04:50 PM.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 04:52 PM.

We know I'm great, but you? You ain't worth the wait
Givin a 'handshake' is the only time 'phive' elevate
You aint hard, yous a fag, thats one reason u aint fuckin wit me
He likes to 'Bone Thugs' without 'Wish, Lazy, Crazy, Bizzy'
You can stand tall, but you'll get knocked out tryin ya best
The way it 'All Falls Down' youll get signed by 'Kanye West'
Not hard....................ur gay as shit and ugly u faggot
I'll have you seein more 'clips' then 'porno addicts'
Not nice, you and ya whole Canadian crew is garbage
I've been wayyyyyyyy passed 5 since kindergarten


blah-age

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yo this kid thinks hes gotasswhoopin4me, you cant spit rap, so you betta off joinin the army and bein all that you can be, cuz truly you cant beat phive, you couldnt even handle three,//
face it everyone on this site is a rap fake, but it just happens were all betta than you for gods sake, my rap style cant break, battlin phive you get slaughtered like your camping at crystal lake,// im on the rap expediton, with lyrical compsotion, im knockin ya shit off without competition, your spittin repetion, im calculatin my head with rhymes like a mathemetician, im puttin ya in a lyrical submission, ill leave you wit so many bars, youll be sittin in prison, gotasswhoopin4u is my mission,// im pushin my way to the top, i was named after hip hop, ill make ya stop, knockin yo ass down wit one pop// mad scientifical verses ar what comes outta my head, leave ya near dead, bustin off lead, rippin ya bran from ya head, i cant lose kid, ya heard what i said,//
i spit magic werds, that leave ya with parrallyzed nerves, im cappin off mother fuckers,//
you think you got what it takes to take me out, i wouldnt flinch even if ya shout, no doubt, im takin this bout,//
ill get under ya skin like scabies, my lines are crazy like rabies, im infectin women wit babies, hittin on bitches, and fuckin ladies//
im throwin lyrics at you like theyre flamin torches, when i walk through my town i got bitches screamin for me from theyre porches,//
ill leave ya feelin blue, cuz i beat you, everyone knew i would too, cuz ive gotasswhoopin4u

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Phive Is standing Tall

................Damn, you went way over the limit.

Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

Vote for gotaasswhoopin4u

This goes to prove that one can spit a ton the other can spit 10 n still have it

Got: tight as work on the punches n the flow I was feelin ya verse the whole way threw

Bes Line:
You can stand tall, but you'll get knocked out tryin ya best
The way it 'All Falls Down' youll get signed by 'Kanye West'

Phive: ya had a long verse n u started to venture off the point a lil bit ya punches started hard then got weaker towards the end the flow was good but like the punches it got sloppy towards the end as well

so the vote goes to Gotaasswhoopin4u


No Hatin, Jus Votin

Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

ONE-SIDED

gaw4u took this one..punches were harder, better structure
and nice flow to it, overall u had a good drop tho

phive: ur drop was kinda weak, only saw like a couple punches
in there after all that thinkin of urs, but elevate more and
work on those punches though

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..The Council..
7 Day Theory

what the fuck are you talkin about i stayed the limit and yall fuckin idiots know i won this shit you just vote for him cuz you dont know rap you fuckin idiots

yell at me all u want son aint gettin u a vote now is it? sit back n jus take it look im fuckin 0-2 n my opinion i squashed the fools i went up against but shyt happens so live wit it!!!

ya dawg but its fuckin bull shit i crunched this fool

Voted For: gotaasswhoopin4u

I hated both verses, but at least yours contained punches. Phive man, quit focusing on the mutlies and try and work more punches in there.

Liked the porn addict line, but then again, I've seen it before...

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<marquee>.:: Verbal Reformatory ::.</marqee>

I'm gonna tell you why you didn't win.
You didn't have punches..or very little that weren't affective. Can you honestly say, you look at your verse and say 'Damn, that was creative' or 'Damn, that was hot!'


Your '10 lines' are not at all 10 lines..that's like fuckin 30 with 10 slashes in it. Can you read that and say 'this sounds good' No, you can't

Think about that, and improve. I'm not being mean, I'm telling you the truth.

Uppin.

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