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01-25-05, 06:57 PM | #1 | |||||||
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My Emotion
IP: 3846 302F
my most heart felt track ever, please peep itll mean alot
i trip a few times but let me kno what RV thinks!!!!! http://knotize.dmusic.com
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01-25-05, 07:19 PM | #2 | ||||||
Bow Chicka Bow Wow
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IP: FEFC E273
yea this is a real heartfelt track.......chorus was pretty coo.......lyrics are good....flow was pretty solid throughout this......there was just this one part at the end of your third verse were you just kinda stopped.......but other than that i got the message you were trying to get across.....lyrics were good....delivery was good.......only thing i would recomened is turning down your voice overs/doubles or whatever turn em down just a little bit more.
overall this was a pretty good track |
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01-25-05, 10:41 PM | #3 | |||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
ya you did just kinda stop there at the end, but ya, i couldn't or wouldn't do a song like this. it aint bad for what it is, you got your message across and you sent a pretty solid emotion out.... i'd say a job well done.... on what you were tryin to do here.
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01-26-05, 01:42 AM | #4 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 4983 BDCE
listenin...
beat is real nice, kinda reminds me of a tupac joint voice is coo ..im feelin it verse has a real nice flow and delivery/emotion is pretty tight lyrics were definatly on point also feelin the hook also overall this is a real dope track man keep droppin ~1~
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01-27-05, 08:20 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 0825 899A
nice beat, i like how you put your voice lower in the background while you were talkin, yea, this was heartfelt,i liked your lyrics, your flow was good here, fell off at times,you seemed to be going quite fast, maybe slow down a bit so you dont stumble over your words, but find a balance, because you dont want to sound like your talking instead of rhyming, ok, you did slow down, towards the middle, you caught yourself, nice job with this man, i was feelin it..1
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