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Old 01-25-05, 06:03 PM   #1
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RV needs to learn to vote..for real

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Dex said this:

best line: "But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang"
-nice meta use, hard hitting punch -bang on target. (best bar on ya verse by far)

That was defenitly NOT by best line.. i used that about 2 months ago, and even then it was just decent at most

& this hated kids ugly as fuck, and I wont lie
Hes the ONLY cat to post his pic on HHS & get 0 replies

^ best line in my verse.. Why? because it was a hard personal

Personal > wordplay > meta > multies

period.
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Old 01-25-05, 06:19 PM   #2
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I never posted my pic on HHS foo
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Old 01-25-05, 06:22 PM   #3
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Normal Punches-

Personal Punches-

Metaphors-

Multiple Rhymes-

Structure-

Flow-

Word Play-

^^Thats my voting for Text Battles, I got sick of typing it and forgeting stuff so wrote it in Word and saved it. Big time saver.

Emotion-

Imagery-

Structure-

Vocabulary-

Story Line-

^^That's how I will be voting on topical battles from now on.
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Old 01-25-05, 06:23 PM   #4
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yea ive seen the picture/hang line a while back......but yet i agree most kids cant vote, cause ppl like wickedclown have 17 wins, and if you peep his verses they are plain wack
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Old 01-25-05, 06:30 PM   #5
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Did you see wickedclowns battle with Pop Lotty? ROFLZ
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Old 01-25-05, 06:33 PM   #6
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Originally Posted by Personify
Normal Punches-

Personal Punches-

Metaphors-

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Structure-

Flow-

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^^Thats my voting for Text Battles, I got sick of typing it and forgeting stuff so wrote it in Word and saved it. Big time saver.

Emotion-

Imagery-

Structure-

Vocabulary-

Story Line-

^^That's how I will be voting on topical battles from now on.

Just because they have more, or if a certain category better, DOES NOT mean their verse was better. You gotta look at the whole verse foo.
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Old 01-25-05, 06:34 PM   #7
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Yes, and that nigga is winning 4-3...I mean, I didn't put effort in at all, but damn..

he said some shit about me looking in the sky and askin 'why'
roflmmfbao!!
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Old 01-25-05, 06:36 PM   #8
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cel...i said that was your best line...i believe, and also told you that the hang concept was played or getting played

but in any case, you should feel like that you are getting votes


oh and p.s. thanx for returning the vote in by battle ass
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Old 01-25-05, 06:52 PM   #9
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Word... voters here suck ass... I concluded that when kontro beat me in audio with yet another "you like to bone thugs" intro... and his best line in the actual verse was about me being hairy.
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Old 01-25-05, 06:53 PM   #10
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Most people here can neither battle vote or type at all.

NAm-FuCkIN-SayIN FoO!!!!

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Old 01-25-05, 07:38 PM   #11
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LOL Teach Them Bitchez how to Vote? .....LOL.......Yeah we should have a voting class for ppl who alllways fuck the voting game up LOL
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Old 01-25-05, 07:49 PM   #12
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Just because they have more, or if a certain category better, DOES NOT mean their verse was better. You gotta look at the whole verse foo.

I was just about to say that

If i come with fire and bring hard ass personals, then he comes with some wack multi's, some blah meta's, and played wordplay.. whos gonna win?

By Personify's way.. he would

exactly my point.. RV needs to learn how to vote
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Old 01-25-05, 07:50 PM   #13
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Just because they have more, or if a certain category better, DOES NOT mean their verse was better. You gotta look at the whole verse foo.


I also put a couple of sentences on why the people won or lost. What to work on, and what they are doing good. Just forgot to put that. I hate people who just "check the polls" or put "u got this..............." If you don't vote then at least leave feedback.
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Old 01-25-05, 07:51 PM   #14
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can u guys vote on the abttle in my sig proof right there
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Old 01-25-05, 07:53 PM   #15
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Did I say the person with more categories wins? No. I do that so they see what often gets graded in battles.
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