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01-27-05, 08:44 PM | #1 | |||||||
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bite tha bullet bitch?
IP: 2AF4 5C39
see its hard for me an my home boy ta believe /that you bitches aint fake ass fucks so leave/ shity ass pre-writtin rhymes everybody sees...whos on my nuts
woke up one day an decided ta be a rapper (ya you?) shit wat can be worse than readin a fucked up verse/ ill look at it after talkin behind some ones back that aint rap sit back (go ta church) ................ Like My Boy Said , All Ya Sound Fake, Fuckin With Us, Is A Mutha Fuckin Mistake. All Your Shit Is Bitch Made. Waisting Your Time Hatin, While Me And My Boy Gettin Paid, Laid ,Allways on The Upgrade. We Graduated, Yall In Grade One,Shittin ya Pants , Well We Bustin Our Gun.Write Back So We Can Beef, Setiling Beef Bye Knocking Out Teeth........its gods belief. see we were playin in tha beginin but this is game where theres no forgiven tryin ta make an exception an make a livin.... come ta my side of tha story of bein influenced by rap an glory... lost wit out my pride so why should i worry, bout soulders who've died a never endin story..........back ta my boy corey Corey.L Double.E is The Name , Makin A fool Of Fake Ass Rappers, Is The Game . Diss Back, The Outcome Won't Be The Same, It's Bout The Fame. Money Rules The World , Makin Money Pimpin These gurls, From T.O, Peterbrough , Fuckit All Ontario.No Better Sinario .We Makin Tha Dinario.We Changin The Game , Better Recognize The Name.Ill Put All Yo Shit To Shame. im done wit you fucks never held a gun, just holdin your nuts..... save you excuse 's cuz your lyrics are clueless to tha bullshit you say so shut tha fuck up nobody likes you any way....fuck u have a nice day now wat can ya ta that?????????
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01-28-05, 09:08 AM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
yo want to battle me nigga
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01-28-05, 09:09 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
lets go bitch stoping one emce at a time
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01-28-05, 09:18 AM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
convicted, for some reason i liked your shit but u need a lot of work
good: ur 2 and 3 verse were tight, good rymes and vocab could use an upgrade but not so much needed.. bad: ur first and last verses, not a fan of those, seems like every line took an hour to read. no hate my friend keep postin and keep workin hard id say 5/10 "RETURN THA FAVOR"
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01-28-05, 04:14 PM | #5 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 9C92 533D
work on it...u got hella potential if u just fix ur structure...
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