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01-29-05, 03:31 PM | #1 | ||||
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"Hennessey" Feat. Tupac... thats right
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My third open mic. today... This is a song Obie Trice did with Tupac.. So im replacin his shit will my shit... thats right kids... get ready... The bold is Pac and the rest is me... They wanna know whos my role model, Its in a brown bottle, Yo what's our mother fuckin motto nigga? Hennessey... They wanna know whos my role model, Its in a brown bottle, Yo what's our mother fuckin motto nigga? Hennessey... Thats whats im sippin on... Now tell them who I be... A big ballin ass nigga named Pac... Now I was born in the gutter facing life or death, I was a thug ever since my momma gave me breath, These motherfuckaz wanna see me die, So who am I? To try to warn 'em, I'll buck and bomb 'em, them niggas fry, Ay remember me', Damn that Hennessey, The nigga you don't wanna see, let me precede, My definition of some thug shit, y'all don't hear me? Now that it's poppin aint no love bitch, I maintain in the game and the gutter is where I still kick it, I'm tryin to hustle up a meal ticket, I'm still wicked in my ways, a hustler till my dying days, Aint nothin wrong with gettin paid, So nigga blaze, cuz we some motherfuckin fools, Walkin through the streets wearing jewels, Breakin niggaz, fakin moves, Even the cops can't stop us, My enemies, Flip when the see me drink a fifth of that Hennessey... They wanna know whos my role model, Its in a brown bottle, Yo what's our mother fuckin motto nigga? Hennessey... They wanna know whos my role model, Its in a brown bottle, Yo what's our mother fuckin motto nigga? Hennessey... Thats whats im sippin on... Now tell them who I be... A big ballin ass nigga named One... See I was born in D.C... guess that answers why I am, The way I am, not to mention i was deprived of fam., Education? Haha, A celebration everyday I been livin, 3 felonies under my name, all ever since i been spittin, Been sippin on that Hennessey in that brown bottle, Drinkin mugs, takin chugs till I pluck and sounds hollow, I found hollows to solve my problems, or hand me some, Callin the kid a hoodlum... coincidence cuz i actually was, It was beef to the point wheres it goes past a nudge, First when I stashed a knife and a gat was tucked, Tired of runnin from the police, when they fire on me, An disguise on me and even then its all eyez on me, All im seein is violence, enough to stop the raps, See my clique beefin, call to know i got his back, The game is still his and im sure he watches that, So I ain't gon' quit this shit till Pac is back... They wanna know whos my role model, Its in a brown bottle, Yo what's our mother fuckin motto nigga? Hennessey... They wanna know whos my role model, Its in a brown bottle, Yo what's our mother fuckin motto nigga? Hennessey... haha.. and im just playin around... We miss you Pac... Last edited by OneStepBeyond : 01-31-05 at 02:35 PM. |
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01-29-05, 05:08 PM | #2 | ||||
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come on... nobodies posted feedback on any of my shit
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01-29-05, 10:05 PM | #3 | ||||
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leave feedback.......................................... ..
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01-29-05, 10:30 PM | #4 | |||||||
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Another nice piece...you came better here. Nice flow and structure...decent vocab, I like how the structure of this is put together. Shoulda put Trice's shit in there too...but tight shit keep it up. Flaws...too basic vocab at times. Just work on it...peace.
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01-29-05, 10:45 PM | #5 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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yo now this was way better than that supposably "Many Men Remix" dat one kid did on here...u gots it especially for having only 19 posts i could tell u did this before..but hey i'm no dick rider so i have ta leave some constructive critisim...u need ta add a little more multi's...i'm not sayin i'm better i have the same prob but otherwise u were really good
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01-30-05, 12:11 PM | #6 | ||||
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uppin.............................................
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01-30-05, 03:13 PM | #7 | ||||
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uppin for feedback................................
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01-30-05, 03:53 PM | #8 | ||||
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that was actually some nice shit bruh,drop links to an open mic you left feed on
or this will be closed
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01-30-05, 04:54 PM | #9 | ||||
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01-31-05, 04:39 PM | #10 | ||||
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uppin for feedback................................
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