Iight, this song is from our E TOWN productions. Its only three people rite now, me, e lee, and pre.

this song is called on da runn, by elee featuring pre, the beat is made by e lee.

My shit aint ready yet, but listen to this track and gimme sum feedback about the ryhmes and the beat and all dat shit.


If after hearing this song u wanna talk bussiness about beats IM me at pr3stige on aim, and ill give u E lees SN.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/etownmusic.htm

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E Town on the monitor, shout out to PRE and E LEE, shout out to jeff, D.A, Obi, shabeatz, rated r, and everyone else whos doin there own thing.

and thats all i gotta say....

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nice beat, i like it, came out dope..intro is long,but whoever is on it,has a nice voice..just a little low..but i like this beat alot, i'll check back later to peep the finished product.1

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iight thnxs for that feedback, ima need a lil more from some more people tho.

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E Town on the monitor, shout out to PRE and E LEE, shout out to jeff, D.A, Obi, shabeatz, rated r, and everyone else whos doin there own thing.

and thats all i gotta say....

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uuuhhhh, i could realli use alot more feedback then one post.

listen to teh track and tell me exactly wat u think of it.

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E Town on the monitor, shout out to PRE and E LEE, shout out to jeff, D.A, Obi, shabeatz, rated r, and everyone else whos doin there own thing.

and thats all i gotta say....

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IIght...The beat is Nice..I'm Likin It..Sample is Coo...long ass intro...vocals are too loud over the beat...should be lowered a bit...First cat got a good flow..lyrics were good...Second Cat is good too..The thing is both these emcees need better emotion..soundin a bit lazy wit it...IIght..

yea i kno i told em that lol, this song aint finished being edited yet tho.

i did catch the vocals being too loud, and the emotion, and the intro.
so ima go ell e lee about that and hell fix up the mess ups.

i needed to hear the same thing i was thinkin from someone else, thnxs fam.

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E Town on the monitor, shout out to PRE and E LEE, shout out to jeff, D.A, Obi, shabeatz, rated r, and everyone else whos doin there own thing.

and thats all i gotta say....

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aiight im peepin this shyt....sounds straight so far

the beat is fire fam lay....

your emotion lacks on the hook. you should of either made your voice lower. or put more emotion

hmm your lyrics is dope. your on that dipset juelz santana type shit...shits straight, i think this is pretty dope you just need better quality and a lil more emotional...im feelin dis...lyrics is aiight. nothing spectacular but im feelin

i give this a 6.92/10


return da fav and peep my track fam
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174863

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