Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 02-03-05 at 01:29 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 02:47 PM.

TheWackestMC has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 10:21 PM.

this cat can't even live up to his name... not to be mean
but in a crew like NOK with J-dot he can't be... TheWackestMC
kids like jordan... this cat only has one good comeback
"You know you're BAD when you get beat by me!!!"
but the real sad thing is his one diss was ^^^^^^ that
instead of throwin punches he be a bitch and throws fits
scared of my "schoolin"...this the lil boy that always "fakes sick"
ya bitch fakes sick and fakes like a big dick in his shit verse
but only when my punches string 'em up he ever "hung like a horse"
shit… wack’s so wack he’ll make you wack… no joke
cuz if u poll for his wackness rv will say… “wack- vote”

................ yo remember no crew votes, i dont wanna have to dq you

__________________

picture u dont go Plat, ya flow go wack...dont it
when i "flash" you this L, it wont b no Kodak moment
dummy,shouldnt b allowed to learn, u get the crowd perturbed
cuz this niggas picture is worth way less than a thousand words
ima shit on this pint thug, bitch i dont like bugs
he thought hot bars, was puttin his Twix on a lightbulb
yo, i get sick from a sign of u
they shoulda stuck a needle in ya head when u was born like China do
u know when u peep this verse, ya knees might quiva
and ya punches couldnt get a buzz in a beehive NIGGA...1

__________________

OM's

uppin for votes lets get some honest feed on this battle...holla

__________________

OM's

Voted For: TheWackestMC

this cat can't even live up to his name... not to be mean
but in a crew like NOK with J-dot he can't be... TheWackestMC
^^^weak opener...
kids like jordan... this cat only has one good comeback
"You know you're BAD when you get beat by me!!!"
but the real sad thing is his one diss was ^^^^^^ that
^^^if this is a personal it's pretty nice, decent as punch
instead of throwin punches he be a bitch and throws fits
scared of my "schoolin"...this the lil boy that always "fakes sick"
^^^pretty good
ya bitch fakes sick and fakes like a big dick in his shit verse
but only when my punches string 'em up he ever "hung like a horse"
^^^hmmm, decent punch, trouble is it don't rhyme
shit… wack’s so wack he’ll make you wack… no joke
cuz if u poll for his wackness rv will say… “wack- vote”
^^^good closer...

picture u dont go Plat, ya flow go wack...dont it
when i "flash" you this L, it wont b no Kodak moment
^^^nice....
dummy,shouldnt b allowed to learn, u get the crowd perturbed
cuz this niggas picture is worth way less than a thousand words
^^^nice as well
ima shit on this pint thug, bitch i dont like bugs
he thought hot bars, was puttin his Twix on a lightbulb
yo, i get sick from a sign of u
they shoulda stuck a needle in ya head when u was born like China do
^^^hot shit
u know when u peep this verse, ya knees might quiva
and ya punches couldnt get a buzz in a beehive NIGGA...1
^^^^decent closer

I voted for WMC for harder hitting punches in the battle.

PS please return the favor thanks!http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174170

__________________

Voted For: TheWackestMC

this cat can't even live up to his name... not to be mean
but in a crew like NOK with J-dot he can't be... TheWackestMC
HAHAHA LMFAO DOPE PERASONAL ON JDOT TOO BAD HES NOT IN THE BATTLE SO WACK 1/10
kids like jordan... this cat only has one good comeback
"You know you're BAD when you get beat by me!!!"
but the real sad thing is his one diss was ^^^^^^ that
OMFG THIS SHIT IS SO HORRIBLE STRECHEDITS FUCKING INSANE WTF PUNCH IS OK BUT KILLED BY THE LENGTH OF THE LINES 2/10
instead of throwin punches he be a bitch and throws fits
scared of my "schoolin"...this the lil boy that always "fakes sick"
LOL DOPE BAR BUT SELF GLORY NONO ALL DAY NONO NONO DONT DO THAT STILL DOPE 5/10
ya bitch fakes sick and fakes like a big dick in his shit verse
but only when my punches string 'em up he ever "hung like a horse"
THIS SHIT DONT RHYME AT ALL WTF 0/10
shit… wack’s so wack he’ll make you wack… no joke
cuz if u poll for his wackness rv will say… “wack- vote
WACK AGAIN NO REAL PUNCH 2/10
10/50 THIS WAS HORRIBLE STRUTURE FLOW WAS 0 PUNCHES WERE WEAK AS FUCK AND THATS WHAT MADE IT SO BAD

picture u dont go Plat, ya flow go wack...dont it
when i "flash" you this L, it wont b no Kodak moment
LOL DOPE SHIT GOOD ASS NAME PLAY AND PERSONAL HERE 8/10
dummy,shouldnt b allowed to learn, u get the crowd perturbed
cuz this niggas picture is worth way less than a thousand words
GOOD NAME PLAY AGAIN LIL STRECHED NOT TOO BAD NICE PUNCH TOO 6/10
ima shit on this pint thug, bitch i dont like bugs
he thought hot bars, was puttin his Twix on a lightbulb
SHIT AINT RHYME 0/10
yo, i get sick from a sign of u
they shoulda stuck a needle in ya head when u was born like China do
LOL DOPE FLOW TO THIS DECENT PUNCH
u know when u peep this verse, ya knees might quiva
and ya punches couldnt get a buzz in a beehive NIGGA
WACK AS SHIT NO 2/10
16/40 GOOD FLOW HERE NICE FLOWED SMOOTH PUNCHES AND DECENT NAME PLAYS AND PERSONALS WON YOU THIS YOURS WERE PRETTY GOOD WHILE YOUR OPPENANTS WERE JUST WACK AND THAT WON YOU THIS

__________________

Voted For: TheWackestMC


he cud d/q u at any time u have 11 lines

punches-TWM
persnals-TWM
metals-none
wordpaly-none
vocab-TWM
flow-both
struture-tie

TWM cmae a little harder close battle though both elevate but TWM took this came a little harder on the punches

__________________

no i def dont have 11 lines LS u must b tired or somethin lol but thanks for the honest feed. uppin

__________________

OM's

no i def dont have 11 lines LS u must b tired or somethin lol but thanks for the honest feed. uppin
__________________

__________________

OM's

______________________________uppin for votes holla at me--------------------

__________________

OM's

Voted For: TheWackestMC

Pictureperfect2
structure is good.. flow is pretty good.. you had a few multis.. you attempted wordplay, but most of it just came out garbage like.. a few, at best, of your punches connected.. you had a few attempted personals, but for the most part.. they didnt connect..

TheWackestMC
structure is good.. flow is on target.. no multis.. wordplay is decent.. a few of your punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
pictureperfect had more multis and attempted more personals.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. TheWackestMC had better wordplay and more connecting punches.. so, to me, wordplay and punches have more of an effect then multis and personals, so my vote goes to TheWackestMC.. pretty close battle though..

VOTE - THEWACKESTMC

Voted For: pictureperfect2

pictureperfect2:
this cat can't even live up to his name... not to be mean
but in a crew like NOK with J-dot he can't be... TheWackestMC
decent personal, nice opener overall
kids like jordan... this cat only has one good comeback
"You know you're BAD when you get beat by me!!!"
but the real sad thing is his one diss was ^^^^^^ that
another good personal
instead of throwin punches he be a bitch and throws fits
scared of my "schoolin"...this the lil boy that always "fakes sick"
decent
ya bitch fakes sick and fakes like a big dick in his shit verse
but only when my punches string 'em up he ever "hung like a horse"
blah, setup was weak, 2nd line i understood but coulda been worded a lot better
shit… wack’s so wack he’ll make you wack… no joke
cuz if u poll for his wackness rv will say… “wack- vote”
weak closer

TheWackestMC:
picture u dont go Plat, ya flow go wack...dont it
when i "flash" you this L, it wont b no Kodak moment
nice meta here, decent opener overall
dummy,shouldnt b allowed to learn, u get the crowd perturbed
cuz this niggas picture is worth way less than a thousand words
decent personal
ima shit on this pint thug, bitch i dont like bugs
he thought hot bars, was puttin his Twix on a lightbulb
"bitch i don't like bugs"...random as hell
yo, i get sick from a sign of u
they shoulda stuck a needle in ya head when u was born like China do
weak punch
u know when u peep this verse, ya knees might quiva
and ya punches couldnt get a buzz in a beehive NIGGA.
decet closer

Winner: Pictureperfect, for harder punches, although neither of you came that hard. Wack, your shit just fell apart, and you need some elevating...unless you're an alias and doing this on purpose.

RTF @ the link in my sig, honest explained votes only

__________________