Indeph is Italic
Dolla-Bill is Bold
And I did the Hook.
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if i could turn back tha hands of time
i wouldve got wit monique befo she got wit mark for tha 4th time
and dat was way back in seventh grade and shit
but i understand cuz i had to step up my game a bit
and i wouldve also neva blown trees wit will and dre
back in eigth grade when we went crazy in chi-town dat day
i would have neva even started tha devil boiz
wouldve tried to keep our lungs clean so we wouldnt
write bout clappin tha toy

i should have helped back when lance got stomped by go-lightly
dont know why but i was scared, cant figure why lance aint
wanna scrap me

up in foot locker broke, damn i should have stole them nikes
and im on regrets, i should have neva fuckin fucked dat bitch ashley
should have know she was bluffin talkin bout we was havin a baby
now when moms bring it up its always "what ifs" and "maybes"
and as i sit here wit these thoughts i wonder "wow"
but dat was then, nigga dis is now (holla at me)
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The clocks go backwards fast...I'm age 2 again
Back in the 2 flat,In pampers,the horror ready to begin..
This place seems familar,I'm feelin this isn't new to me..
then I remember my burned hand,So I decided to move the grease..
One event avoided,so I played with my toys and... 9 years
go past and I'm with my boys and the mood is all fun..
I remembered this last time,somebody gonna squad up..
I take off my jacket,remove my hat and I aint even move..
my niggas ask me what Im doin and on Que here comes Mike King from school..

Last time I let him hit me...but now my courage is better in me..
plus my awareness and I aint scared since I know I'll make it..
Dude Try to swing on me,I ducked and hit his face quick..
Any error I do I'll retrase it..anyday occuring I may fix..
but to my lifetime today its..
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wish da shit wit me and brittany wouldve stayed at a friend level
guess i was a lil too attached to a bitch not in my age level
we in da same grade though, she down tha hallway and shit
but i aint know til later dat she was 17 and shit (damn)
aint dat a bitch? but as they say "dumb is as dumb does"
so we both dumb for makin it last as long as it was
so many rumors, were they true? who knows but her?
guess i'll neva know but i dont care cuz it aint like i gave dick to her
wish i neva wouldve led evan on last year
hope when she finally got tha news, there was no blues, no tears
i wanna go back and tell tia dat she was cute after-all
but it got fucked up after what i told her friend at tha mall
i wonder if it got back to her, i should give her a call
naw, fuck dat, i aint no hoe, i do what i want
and as i sit here wit these thoughts i wonder "wow"
but dat was then, nigga dis is now (holla at me)
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2 years past I'm in middle school..I finally found a little boo..
with bigger boobs better body,but without me knowing..
she slept with everyday..That happened Last time..
but lies I aint getting fed though..so she invited me to her place..
but this time I said no..So thats outa of the way..
and on the intercom they said in 2 months they announcin the grades..
so I decided now,Im gonna buckle down,and buckle up..
for the years to come..so I focues,and blocked out the interfearing fun..
So I study,do classwork,pay attention,and actually pass 1st semester
now I'm workin better,I get my report card,with all perfect letters..
I'm proud of my achievements...but my image is gettin fuzzy..
and I was daydreamin..I feel Dolla shakin me and he awakens me..
We up in Science with a timeline project,askin for my data sheet..
I see what I've become and I don't wanna be changing me..
so The answer to the question..Nah..I wouldn't change a thing
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I appreicate the lack of feed,Thanks yaw.

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oh shit...dis came out good...thanx for da collab cuz...4real...but there is somethin missin though...umm...SOME MUTHAFUCKIN FEEDBACK...stop snorin yall...~1~

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up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up...uppin dis shit...damn

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uppin...still...

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the way you posted it deph was all messed like the Line in it n shit confused me where shit was n shit but i read it n shit the verses were good yo check it

DollaBill
ight the defenitions you gave were rich and very good the emotion was ighh the flow was great but you really lacked stucture not on the whole verse but a lil bit of it, it was all ight but just lacked there some good vocab the imagery was there i was feeling your part just to let you know

Indeph homie
ighh that was tighh very good stucture and a great flow some nice vocab and some great wording and grammer very good imagery and the creativty was there the pace of the multi was there, i felt yours alot too alot different styles here tho but that was tight

yo return feed links are in my sig pz

finally...thanx fam...i'll get at yo shit in a lil bit...still uppin

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yo i read this be4 i musta just got caught up and shit and i forgot to leave feed, anyways i thought this was really good emotinal shit that touches deep down and shit and shit u could relate too good multi's and rhymes and that the only thing is that it's too long but i'll give it a 7.5/10 keep it up

^^^thanx fam...we purposily made it real long...imagine our first idea...50-60 bars EACH...wit no hook...but we cut it 2 32 bars each wit a hook...but yeah thanx

still uppin

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still muthafuckin uppin

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yeah i was feelin the whole thing...dolla you brought alot of emotion to the set...and indeph yours was the same...the verses that yall wrote were hand in hand...whent from one to the other...and it all made sense...the flow was good...but the structure was a lil off...just work on that and that will be even better...9/10

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"I didnt choose this life, this life chose me"

HONOR and RESPECT

this was nice i liked it a lot..........good emotion by the both of you............you both had good multi's and flow........dolla u elevated a lot since i last checked out some work you dropped...........keep it up and you be set.........and indeph pretty much what i always see just non stop goood shit..........this was a tight collab.........good job by the both of you
rtf....if ya want indeph......links in sig

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