HOOK:
it's the remix to complexity,
Onestep and Indeph are right next to me
and we make the people see
who rhymes best with that hennessey(2x)

INDEPH'S Verse:
If you don't comprehend,niggas don't comment then..
in rap I graduated with honors in colleges...
I throw diplomas up like vomitin..with my game
I stay on top of it,so you can't topple it...I got god as a operative..
you hear my raps in the bible,I aint on that kazza shit..
fix me up with a gig..and I know what a good offer is..
you come to me,you choking,like your fear is clogging
your esafegus..I'm nice to the poor,and I'm kind to kids..
you know what Mind is.(minus).Ironically positive..
I'm on the radio and I aint them bitches,scream for concert tix..
Honestly this Artist,will make yo face look like a picaso pic..
the world will die before me,I bought coffens for the apocolypce
fuck Shady aftermath,murder Inc and roc-A-bitch..
I'm on a rampage and nobody stoppin this..I'm an optimist..
because I'ma poppa nigga,like the nigga my momma with..
anyone who got a problem with,me and step,hooddawg
we all the shit..

HOOK:
it's the remix to complexity,
Onestep and Indeph are right next to me
and we make the people see
who rhymes best with that hennessey(2x)

My Verse:
it's Complexity with a whole new definition
my words are so meaningful that it's like a rap demolition
we the best rapperz layed out at exhibition
but if u a mathematical statistion
i'll fucking leave you with a case worse than Bill Clinton's heart condition
bitch you's a fake like Michael Jackson
who started out as a black son and myseriously became white
which he claims to be due to a pegment retraction
man, just face it you racist and you too pussy to face shit
I think bout anybody would want to be in my position
and they always want to be in my newest edition
but if you want ta be in my shit you got too do an audition

HOOK:
it's the remix to complexity,
Onestep and Indeph are right next to me
and we make the people see
who rhymes best with that hennessey(2x)

OneStepBeyond's Verse:
my complexity is the recipe for bringin the best mc's,
down to their knees like they was havin oral sex with me,
you best believe i'll reign on a parade, question me,
yeah i consider you hott... but you still less degrees,
never would i let some pussy faggot get the best of me,
sprawl them out in a bag like distrubution of ecstacy,
better be messin be... cause nothin the way that it seems,
changin the seen, my system rockin the pavement to sleep,
as plain as it is to see, there'll be no call for help,
readin this back to me and i've almost lost myself,
im bout to toss myself off to end this madness and shit,
i can't hurt your flow? say that after i attach a cactus to it,
im always that sick, no need to practice the shit,
and im attached to this flow while on puttin a magnet to it,
bastards can get lit cause im tryna raise me a family,
if you was walkin up below me you still couldn't understand me,
im that complex...

HOOK:
it's the remix to complexity,
Onestep and Indeph are right next to me
and we make the people see
who rhymes best with that hennessey(4x)

let's get some feed yo

i thought the concept was cool the rhymes were tight the only thing i didn't like was the raps in the bible with a curse word in the same line seemed kinda hypcritical like kanye west. the rest of it was str8.

thats cool sorry bout the thing u said, ain't really that big but i could tell you religious but that's ok thanx for the feed let's get some more now

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This was a nice piece. Good concept which left it open for yous to have a bit of fun.

Indeph's verse: was dope as fuck! as we would expect from him. some great multis and a hectic selection of double rhymes, wordplay and a great flow with a nice structure.
"Honestly this Artist,will make yo face look like a picaso pic.."
This was a fucking dope line, stood out of a fancy crowd tho. Just showed the quality of your metaphors.

Hood Dawg: held his own without doubt. A nice verse with some good wordplay and multi rhymes. Good vocab, quite some anger in that i could sense.

OneStepBeyond's verse: I especially liked the first five lines or so of yours, they flowed so well and were cool. Top marks for those. The rest was cool aswell, I avnt seen any of your previous open mic work. I think by looking at this you prob drop some heavy stuff. Il look out in the future. Good structure aswel and good keeping with the topic.

dopeness 8.5/10

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yo nice ta see ya'll like are shit this is really is giving me a good feelin' and i like it and ya'll right i had lots of fun with this i tried to get as creative as i could get yo and i probobaly could even be better yet if i really concentrated and yo Dolla-Bill, if u want we could remix one of ur songs man if u up too it u could give me a shout out. aight keep the good feed up

keep the feedback comin' yo

uppin.............................................

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That shit was guttah....Yall need ta put sum vocals 2 this shit with a just blaze type of beat!!!


yall verse where nice...nuff respect ta yall hustlahs doin yall thang!!




ColdStiLL

uppin............................................. .

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i was feelin this drop. i liked the chorus n the concept of the whole thing. simple and gettin the point across , nah mean. both had good flows and rhyme schemes were on in most places so i'd give it an 8.5 outta ten.holla back at me n return the FAVOr

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Relax and Jot Notes=Squad-Up feat Big City and Hitchcock
Rap or Die=Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Dollas in the Bank= Squad-Up feat Hitchcock
Squeeze First = Squad-Up

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im uppin on some of the older shit of mine..too dope ta let go..