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| Pleim |
  
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1 | 16.67% |
| Skriptz |
  
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5 | 83.33% |
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02-12-05, 09:00 PM
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Pleim vs Skriptz
IP: 258C A279
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02-12-05, 09:06 PM
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IP: 8AEB 01A9
Pleim has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 09:06 PM.
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02-12-05, 09:13 PM
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IP: 8AEB 01A9
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Dawg, you're just a prewritting faggot, I BEG you to stop Why the fuck you need a day to check in, and 30 min to drop? Yo son, i'm teaching you suttin, so please listen a sec You the only person with 32 wins and ZERO respect Give up on the net, you just got dickriders and shit dude Cuz-I~could-get~wins-if~I-only~typed-like~this-too! Look man, i'm the better rapper that you won't get past Cuz even the guy in ya avatar raps better than your bitch ass! |
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02-12-05, 09:18 PM
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IP: 258C A279
Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-12-05 09:18 PM.
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02-12-05, 09:28 PM
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IP: 258C A279
I’ll destroy this hoe, & make him my Bitch of the Month I’ll give this kid a lunch box, so he can ‘pack’ a punch Look, RV and I, we already know your gay You need a spellcheck kid, cuz, you cant spell anyday Bet he thought he was on top of RV, yeah, till he fell Thinking he getting some wins, he actually stacking more L’s You coming hard? These lyrics than are tighter FB’s in leotards* You half-stupid for battling me, like decapitated retards *FB = Fat bitches dont get my punches, etc? dont vote then
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02-12-05, 09:29 PM
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IP: 258C A279
I’ll destroy this hoe, & make him my Bitch of the Month I’ll give this kid a lunch box, so he can ‘pack’ a punch Look, RV and I, we already know your gay You need a spellcheck kid, cuz, you cant spell anyday Bet he thought he was on top of RV, yeah, till he fell Thinking he getting some wins, he actually stacking more L’s You coming hard? These lyrics than are tighter FB’s in leotards* You half-stupid for battling me, like decapitated retards Key’d *FB = Fat bitches dont get my punches, etc? dont vote then
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02-12-05, 11:54 PM
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#7
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IP: 258C A279
uppin this battle
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02-13-05, 12:20 AM
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Ike
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IP: EB8D 9EAC
Voted For: Skriptz
Pleim.......................... Dawg, you're just a prewritting faggot, I BEG you to stop Why the fuck you need a day to check in, and 30 min to drop? ehh ok opener...should have worded it better and made it a better punch.... Yo son, i'm teaching you suttin, so please listen a sec You the only person with 32 wins and ZERO respect decent...nothin more....nothin less... Give up on the net, you just got dickriders and shit dude Cuz-I~could-get~wins-if~I-only~typed-like~this-too! lol i laughed when i read this...hit nice...nice personal...you best bar... Look man, i'm the better rapper that you won't get past Cuz even the guy in ya avatar raps better than your bitch ass! ok personal.....hit ok SKriptz....... I’ll destroy this hoe, & make him my Bitch of the Month I’ll give this kid a lunch box, so he can ‘pack’ a punch kinda played out here....decent opener though Look, RV and I, we already know your gay You need a spellcheck kid, cuz, you cant spell anyday nice personal here.... Bet he thought he was on top of RV, yeah, till he fell Thinking he getting some wins, he actually stacking more L’s hit decent........ You coming hard? These lyrics than are tighter FB’s in leotards* You half-stupid for battling me, like decapitated retards nice wordplay here...some may not get this....but this was your best bar....nice ok hard decision to make here....but i have to go with skriptz for a more consistent verse all around....you both had some good punches....but skriptz was decent all the way through...where in a bar or two of pleims...i felt like he could have made a harder punch out of his words....good battle here.....but this goes to skriptz for consistency
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02-13-05, 12:51 AM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: Skriptz
skriptz...nice drop I’ll destroy this hoe, & make him my Bitch of the Month I’ll give this kid a lunch box, so he can ‘pack’ a punch -haha solid line, nice punch...lunch box 10/10 Look, RV and I, we already know your gay You need a spellcheck kid, cuz, you cant spell anyday -nice play with that post, haha 10/10 Bet he thought he was on top of RV, yeah, till he fell Thinking he getting some wins, he actually stacking more L’s -nice personal, flowed nicely with other bars 8/10 You coming hard? These lyrics than are tighter FB’s in leotards* You half-stupid for battling me, like decapitated retards -think some words were outta place, but still solid, solid 8/10 overall: 36/40.....solid solid drop, loved the punches...personals gotter done, creativity was toppin it, vocab nice, nothing played, closer was weakest line, but still solid bar, this verse kicked ass, i dunno really was to criticize, maybe just put multies in, there, great spit, laughed and actually felt like i was there watching you insult this guy, haha Pliem, i dunno man, skriptz outta your league Dawg, you're just a prewritting faggot, I BEG you to stop Why the fuck you need a day to check in, and 30 min to drop? -didnt really punch him here, weak man 4/10 Yo son, i'm teaching you suttin, so please listen a sec You the only person with 32 wins and ZERO respect -this wasnt bad, nice personal 7/10 Give up on the net, you just got dickriders and shit dude Cuz-I~could-get~wins-if~I-only~typed-like~this-too! -again, weak, not really sayin much, self glorifyin, in a stupid way 3/10 Look man, i'm the better rapper that you won't get past Cuz even the guy in ya avatar raps better than your bitch ass! -bad end to a horrible spit, sorry dude, didnt do it for me 3/10 overall: 17/40 i dunno, didnt look like you really tried, vocab is very simple, flow and structure wasnt really there, sorry man, but you just came out weak, and against someone like skriptz, you gotta bring your top shit, na mean, just keep elevatin, try harder next time
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02-13-05, 12:53 AM
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IP: 258C A279
^word mayn...thats for the honest vote..uppin this
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02-13-05, 02:09 AM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: BACC 8E92
Voted For: Pleim
lol damn Nice pleim..... Yo man this was a good battle.... Skriptz is goes like this... ---------------------- Flow-10/10-Flawless...its right good....... Punches-7/10-Some are played and used a lot before Personals-0/10-you really didn't dissum you talked shit..... Metas-7/10-had some solid metaphors nun too off the chain Vocab-7/10-Decent Vocab nun too special Humor-6/10-lots of played jokes man...its iight.... Overall-6.5/10-Real played man...but it was iight..... Notes-Work on dissing the person u battling...and thats about it..thats was a decent drop...... Pleim ------ Flow-8/10-it was a lil off at some places..but it was good Punches-8/10-Nice man i was feeling tha small Type punch... Personals-9/10-you dissed him on point and did what he really like man.....real nice..... Metas-7/10-didnt see too many but i saw a few...man it was a decent drop for metas u had more a diss drop... Vocab-6/10-Basic vocab but sometimes basic works out well in your case it does.. Humor-8/10-More original in this battle.......it came better....man i was feeling this......i was like wow a few lines... Overall-8.2/10-Nice drop..pretty good for a battle.......i was really feeling this stuff right here man Notes-WORK on ya vocab a lil but otha than that it was pretty ill....man keep that up.....
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02-13-05, 02:14 AM
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IP: 258C A279
how were my jokes played?
when he had fake personas...wow wack site..cheap vote...
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02-13-05, 02:18 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Skriptz
imma have to go w/ Skriptz on dis one, i mean u both came weak on dis one......... punches-skriptz multies-hmmmm well neitha structure-skriptz creativity-kinda a tie vote=skriptz come on u both can do betta than dis |
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02-13-05, 02:32 AM
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FuCk YoU I RhYme BeTtEr
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IP: B334 EBA7
Voted For: Skriptz
aight....decent battle...kinda close...but skriptz took this with better flow, and punches...the wordplay was good, you had good topics in there... I’ll destroy this hoe, & make him my Bitch of the Month I’ll give this kid a lunch box, so he can ‘pack’ a punch (decent opener....flow good...7/10) Look, RV and I, we already know your gay You need a spellcheck kid, cuz, you cant spell anyday (kinda played, but second like saved it..6/10) Bet he thought he was on top of RV, yeah, till he fell Thinking he getting some wins, he actually stacking more L’s (decent...flow is good...wordplay str8...7/10) You coming hard? These lyrics than are tighter FB’s in leotards* You half-stupid for battling me, like decapitated retards (decent closer....flow good...pri the best diss of the battle...8/10) your structure was good as well skriptz... PLEIM Dawg, you're just a prewritting faggot, I BEG you to stop Why the fuck you need a day to check in, and 30 min to drop? (DECENT OPENER...FLOW GOOD...7/10) Yo son, i'm teaching you suttin, so please listen a sec You the only person with 32 wins and ZERO respect (FLOW WAS GOOD...KINDA PLAYED OUT...BUT DECENT...6/10) Give up on the net, you just got dickriders and shit dude Cuz-I~could-get~wins-if~I-only~typed-like~this-too! (WAEK BAR...PLAYED OUT..NOT A GOOD PUNCH..5/10) Look man, i'm the better rapper that you won't get past Cuz even the guy in ya avatar raps better than your bitch ass! (WEAK CLOSER...PLAYED OUT...6/10) YOUR VERSE WASNT BAD, IT JUST WASNT AS CREATIVE AS YOUR OPPONENTS...YOUR FLOW WAS GOOD...YOUR STRUCTURE WAS GOOD...WHAT IT CAME DOWN TO WAS PURE SKILL...AND HE TOOK IT... NO HATE MAYNE... VOTE/ SKRIPTZ
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02-13-05, 03:20 AM
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Ask About Me
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IP: 791D 7873
Voted For: Skriptz
aight this was pretty decent shit seemed kinda weird i dont no.................................lol but anyway...... skriptz you win....but you almost lost becuase of one of his personals......damn this was close..but you get this.....just becuase you made me laugh....lol shit was mad wierd...funny wierd...lol damn good shit...not your best but good...... i was feeling your punxhes....like the lunch one was nice...becuase i have never heard that before.....i also like your vocab alot better than his...and i like how you didnt have to CURSE in order for you to rhyme....but this was close PLIEM....the one line that almost made the difference was that line where you typed like him...now that shit is true...lol mad me chuckle but not laugh//////but good shit...you should tyr out for CS....but nice just wasnt consistant.....elevate like a lil more and you will be mad dope vote=SKIPTZ
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