dont take it personal, but this is the internet, you wrote this track like without the jury you wouldn't be the man you are, which is pretty pitiful if its true... quality was way off, content was so so but you sound like you still need alot of work. 1) presence needs elevation, 2) your mic manners are bad- lots of rumbles, you fade in and out- pick a distance and stay there and stop shuffling the mic around your hand. 3) delivery is lack luster... make it fun for us to listen to, as it is now its not. 1

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