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Old 02-17-05, 07:16 PM   #1
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nice lil intro liek the painos and guitar sample sound familar...beats good...multis r good, flow is kinda stiff word on making your flow smoother (try using alliterations) could use better and more punch lines and metas and similies..delivery seems slightly forced not natural delivery needs work production is ok could come up
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