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i'll simply put it in black and white if u try ta fight i'll soak u in lighter fluid and watch u ignite
fuck, i might take u up the 34th flight and throw u off of that height
and plunge into your burial site, i do shit that ain't rite i fucked ur mom
all night but the pussy was too tight so i went for your sis inspite
u in the rap game but u a disgrace, ur a waste of space,
just better not hope we go face ta face, ur outta place so better vanish
without a trace u try battelin me but i can't keep a straight face
thanx to me ur mama was raped and videotaped before she eventually escaped, so u honestly better think of getting strapped before ur ass gets
capped and bitchslapped


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Da_Throwdest has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 01:12 AM.

Da_Throwdest has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 01:17 AM.

wanna battle, well i got the bars so let's go
& watch me eat this pussy faster, then a starving lesbo

it'z fact u facing, lyrics wit impact that'll attack ur face in
cuz this kid couldn't 'Cum Hott' if he had the sack from satan

hood_dawg the winner? shit i'll him injured
i'll put his 'Ass On The Floor' like when he's eating dinner

Lyrics Expose Excellence, u must slack off when rappin'
cuz nobody 'Fucks Wit Ur Verse' unless they jerk off 2 faggots

surely i'm higher than, this cat that's gettin early retirement
we kno Hood ain't hott, newbies barely adrmire him

yeah u competition but ya got basic scriptures
u'll c ya life 'Flash' b4 ur eyez like ur takin pictures

in my final scripts, i'll leave ya body achin like ya spinal tip
i'll leave this 'Pussy Soaking Wet' like vaginal drips

hood_dawg has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 01:42 AM.

i'll simply put it in black and white if u try ta fight i'll soak u in lighter fluid and watch u ignite
fuck, i might take u up the 34th flight and throw u off of that height
and plunge into your burial site, i do shit that ain't rite i fucked ur mom
all night but the pussy was too tight so i went for your sis inspite
u in the rap game but u a disgrace, ur a waste of space,
just better not hope we go face ta face, ur outta place so better vanish
without a trace u try battelin me but i can't keep a straight face
thanx to me ur mama was raped and videotaped before she eventually escaped, so u honestly better think of getting strapped before ur ass gets
capped and bitchslapped

ight y'all i'm uppin this 4 sum votes let's do this

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

hood...
please do not let any of my comments discourage you from further participation in the rapverse battle forums. brutha, you need alot of elevation........and i mean that with no disrespect. you attempted to drop some multies.....nice, nice(but it doesnt win a battle)......however, you had no personals or hard hitting punchlines in your verse. also, your vocab was a little too simple playboy.......plus, your structure was horrible (you lined it up so it looked like it didnt rhyme). before you continue battling cats in the frontlines...i suggest that you practice working on your drops in the open mic forum........or in the cypher forum. people will help you out if you ask them for some assistance.......and if not.....do some research. peep alot of battles and study them. see what winning pieces look like, for real. i think that you have the potential to do something down the line....so work hard and elevate. you'll only get better homie.

throw...
you handled yours. i've seen better from you.....but you still dropped some heat. good job cutty. you had nice punches and your structure was on point. you had a nice flow going throughout your verse until the part where you accidentily left out a word in line #5, but i still got the picture. you used some alright vocab in here, but i'd like to see you step it up a little in the future (it helps).......as well as with some extra multie use. besides that (from what i noticed)..........shit was straight. you had me laughing in some areas.

once again.....good job gents. you both handles yours like some battlecats. hustle hard.......and keep up the good work. oner...


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Voted For: Da_Throwdest


Punches-Da
Personals-Da
Multi's-Da
Meta's-Da
Structure-Da
Vocab-Da
I THink Throwdest Got This Coz He Came Harder In Al lThose Categories, Plus His Structure Was There, And I Could Read His Ish Good, Unlike The Other Guys, One Sided Battle Man Enough Said

Voted For: Da_Throwdest



IP:

wanna battle, well i got the bars so let's go
& watch me eat this pussy faster, then a starving lesbo

it'z fact u facing, lyrics wit impact that'll attack ur face in
cuz this kid couldn't 'Cum Hott' if he had the sack from satan

VS

all night but the pussy was too tight so i went for your sis inspite
u in the rap game but u a disgrace, ur a waste of space,

voted for the throwdest for better punches

Voted For: Da_Throwdest

trowdest won because he had beeter punch lines they hit har and direct nice vocab somwe nice multis nice flow and structre
best line- wanna battle, well i got the bars so let's go
& watch me eat this pussy faster, then a starving lesbo

8/10

hood dwag ya verse had bad structre ya flow was a lil off and ya punches didnt hit as hard as throwdest

best line-just better not hope we go face ta face, ur outta place so better vanish
without a trace u try battelin me but i can't keep a straight face
4/10

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