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02-23-05, 07:10 PM
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Bellabizzy
IP: A569 E930
First time postin on dis' site...lookin for feedback..good or bad ill take it...Bella~
From the time i was born,better yet when i was concieved my only purpose in this life...entertain lyrically 17 years old grew up in da hood people heavily doubting sayin that i never would now im blowing up da spot,like the US in iraq my words concave ya chest worst den a panic attack 9 years old my daddy left us for a whore Mama turned ta crack after da divor-ice me? i was left wit da weight of da world no longer mama's baby or daddys lil girl. Over the years the stress built up mentally so i got a pen and a paper try to solve this shit sensibly "Bizzy can flow",the younger kids spoke Boys in da hoods claiming "chic here's a joke" but i took the critisism equally"Yea Im a female but we'll settle it evenly" Spit da first bar I had 15 left Killed him wit "yea u good but dude i got breast"...(ha ha) From dat day forward I had one thing in mind talent i could use evn dumb deaf and blind. I spit lyrical truth,its just geniousness I know dat aint a word but yet either is Bizzyness...(ok that was a lil much) Im lyrically inclinded,i make a nigga hit rewind play me over and over, got u saying "whats the last line" Trust me i got more Ima femcee beast and evn if you dont like me,Ima sexy female to say the least......(yea i know) aite' maybe I went a lil bit over toward da end...but like i said bad critisism only makes u wanna prove someone wrong....1....~Bella |
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02-23-05, 08:07 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
nice drop from ya ma i liked it alot but i like the cockiness cuz it helps u out wit ur skills & build ur ego.......lol but naw u got skills overall quality 8.5/10 keep up the good work
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02-24-05, 12:31 AM
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New to RV
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IP: B20F 67F7
Like The Verse, Good Introduction Of Yourself, You Kept It Personal Dog. Uppin On The Vocab And A Lil Imagination And You Got Somthin. Keep At It Son....
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02-24-05, 08:44 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
lol ^^
i think its female, an you callinn her dog (unless i'm wrong lol) but nice shit, a littlebasic in places, but the flow was strong, vocab was there in places, it was dope shit 6/10
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