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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
phive 2 28.57%
Spite 5 71.43%
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Old 01-29-05, 04:21 PM   #16
A-game
New to RV
 
From: bronx, ny
This was feedback posted for phive

IP: 0819 A209

Yo Man Tghis Is A-gam Eu Said My Shit Was Writtin By Someone Els I Swear It Wasent And If It Was From Who ??
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Old 01-30-05, 11:34 AM   #17
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: 4792 68BF

lol uppin on this shit, fuckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk voooote already netceessss
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Old 01-30-05, 04:21 PM   #18
phive
Lyrically Unchallenged
 
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From: Bethany ontario canada
IP: 64A0 EA20

uppin playasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssss
 
Old 01-31-05, 01:04 PM   #19
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: 4792 68BF

another uppin, this site sucks god damn battles last for days around here and this is one of the biggest sites on the net, do people come here to socialise??
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Old 02-02-05, 11:31 AM   #20
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: 3495 F79E

holy fuck this shit still aint got any votes, and im gonna have to still come here and up this shit mother fuck all of you
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Old 02-03-05, 06:48 PM   #21
headgames
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: B67F E6F1

Voted For: Spite

k well you dropped harder, no real personels, but it was decent, some punches hit... but your not a vet...try to make your multi's more then 1 sylable, but otherwise nice... good flow, phive, look at some of this sites best, and try to learn off of them k, you'll both learn how to elevate, but I gotta give this ine to spite
 
Old 02-04-05, 01:34 AM   #22
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: 3495 F79E

hmmmm uppin come on ppl lets get this going oh so it has to be atleast 50 characters wrong well shit
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Old 02-05-05, 12:36 AM   #23
~Lady Fiya~
~*Duchess of Metaphors*~
 
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From: chi-town
IP: 34D2 D886

Voted For: Spite

phive: fix ya structure mayne... and try not to use so many self-glorification lines... you had some aight lines in your verse overall.. however Spite came harder with his lines, a better structure, both ya flow was pretty good.. but i wasn't feeling Spite's closer yours beat his barely... the best lines in this battle were:
rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most,
is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST!
^^those lines right there, was enuff to take the battle.. kinda funny but a nice punch, the only one that stood out even tho the lines are in separate bars, i think the way you worded them were nice..

Spite gets my vote on this one..
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Old 02-05-05, 01:12 PM   #24
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: D27D 0B18

lol aight aight 2 weeks later, this battle is ALMOST done so yah uppin
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Old 02-05-05, 01:17 PM   #25
MC IgGY
Banned: Cheating
 
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From: LA
IP: 8A1A D0A3

Voted For: phive

winner- phive

check it.
I'll give you this loss cuz its not like im taking you of course,
rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most,
is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST!
Now your ghost, i'll toast as i watch this guy choke,
and i dont even need to pull a PHIVE JOKE
Arrive smoked on rap verse im a savage to step
cuz ur so wack, this win will damage my rep
Barrage a vet ur heat is a flare to the best,
i'll cum in ur lungs n watch the baby TEAR THROUGH UR CHEST
Dare you to test but i'll beat you anyday,
so take this loss in a friendly way
cuz hey its the INTERNET ANYWAYZ!

aight, u had decent punches(they need improvement though), your vocab needs to improve, u had some nice inner rhyming.



im makin this fool happy cuz imma battle him, soon ya smile will wipe to a grim, call me fat boy slim, cuz imma funk show brotha about ta win,//
yo you cant be here to watch me ruin ya shit so ill write, my rapstyles tight, i say good night, cuz i laid ya out no de(spite)// yo kid you only wanted phive bars fo me ta spit, well imma give you full potential in this shit, imma leave ya hit, on the ground with a slit wrist//
you cant pick up cuz yur a fag, cant fight ya way out of a wet paper bag, im droppin niggas like im playin tag, break ya leg, so dont brag, cuz ya rap style i made// time fo a closer on this fool, ya uncool, im werkin you like a tool, im drownin you like a three year old in a pool//

nice inner rhyming, punches were pretty good but need improvement, had a little bit of wordplay, not too bad overall



you two are pretty evenly matched, so nice battle
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Old 02-07-05, 03:31 PM   #26
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: 3495 F79E

mmmm victory, i can almost see it, but will phive come back, nope not likely
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Old 02-09-05, 06:29 PM   #27
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: 4792 68BF

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Old 02-10-05, 10:47 AM   #28
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: 4792 68BF

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ daasa
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Old 02-25-05, 10:48 AM   #29
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: BF69 0824

lol this battle started last month, and people still havent finished voting on this lol must be a record or something
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Old 02-25-05, 10:56 AM   #30
Dirty Nigga
E-Style, Bitch.
 
IP: B1A5 868C

Voted For: Spite

Spite got this

Not the strongest battl;e

But spite has the much better structure, an a few punches that hit kinda hard, oth lacked consistancy, an phive the structure of your verse was all over the place, no real flow too it, so spite for the hard hittin lines in what has ta be said wasnt the strongest battle, but spite hands down won this battle

No hate ta neither, an return the fave in any of my battles you see floatin around

Peace
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