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dam gotta d load all these realplayer componants to play this shit it better be worth it

peep sick of this ,tonyself and seventhird

beat is aight first person has a hollow flow good lyrics sound young
vocals are loud they take over the whole song need to back em down a lil bit

second verse good voice good flow real solid presence just need a lil bit more in ya flow switch it up a lil bit not really feelin the dangerous flows repeting thing but all in decent drop holla back keep doin ya thing

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i like the way the beat kicks in with the vocal sample in it...

First Flow- Dont be insulted, you sound like a young female(if you are, then cool), your vocals are kinda ear peircing, hollow like tony said- You have the idea, but it needs more to it, flow could use some improvement- sounds like you workin w/ the right person tho so good luck...1

Second Flow- Yeah man you just took this shit over instantly, Completely owned the track, very comfortable, confident flow- voice was solid, ended kind of abruptly, but this was your song- Keep droppin em' and good luck to both of u... and peep "Sick of This"

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The bit at the beginning saying "dangerous grounds" is WACK. First verse sounds EXACTLY like umm..damn what was her name? Eh, it'll come to me. Lyrics were nice, flow was on. Just needs some more cadence and DEFINITELY a new mic. Second verse, voice is nice. Rare I say anything about anyones voice. Beat is nice as hell. dude's flow was pretty on. Some of the stuff he did and said with his voice felt way outta his vocal range IMO. First Verse needs a new mic.

Oh yeah. Timid Obliv from a few of the boards I been on. Didn't realize till I peeped the sig. Shoulda put curt on this one for shiz. 1

PS congrats on being in the few net tracks I ever listened to more than once.

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it's aight but would be better if that dangoreus groundz was repaeating over and over that gets annoying but u guys did aight 6.5/10

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The fuck? s'not workin for me...

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not bad..i hate the fact that the beats tagged..but hey it works wit it in a way...first dude i aint feelin ya voice..but ya lyrics was there and the effect on ya voice kind of brought ya quality down but it still sounded good..second guy came in all hype but sort of went calm through the middle of his verse but lyrics were decent on your part..pretty good track overal i'd give it a 7/10 peace..return the favor on the new track i dropped "Unpredictable" 1ne....

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iight this was a decent first person.. wasnt really feeling it coulda came a bit harder on this.. i mean your voice i wasnt feeling but theres nothing u can really do about it.. ur flow was nice.. 2nd person.. you owned this song.. came in with good mic presence pretty good drop keep it up.. pz..

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why the fuck is it saying dangerous grounds...maybe she took a beat from a production company named "dangerous grounds" and wanted the beat so bad she made the song Dangerous grounds so it wouldnt seem like she was cheap and jacked a beat

no, im playin..you sound like a girl i used to work with named "princess Cutz" word...girl your dope....

Milkman..wasnt he the one that did the "milkshake" remix and he went

My penis brings all the gurlz to the yard


cant remember anywayz this shit was dope..good job

8/10

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Lord. Wun

good job chick doing it up on the track n shyt lol...not bad at all for a chick thats been rapping for only four months.