this a hot track yo peep it and leave some feedback iight peace..1ne..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/w...olume1music.htm

1ne,...

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*listening*.. i like what ur doing with ur voice on this.. it fits with the beat real nice... the flow is nice pretty much the whole way through.. im not really feeling the beat but im still feeling this song.. its real nice... lyrics are coming pretty hard the whole way through.. chorus is real nice... ughh this song is pretty much just dope...

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good looks on the feed back son..i appreciate it...but damn this shit gettin sleeped on big time...holla at cha boi peeps 1ne....

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aiight im listenin

i guess your qualities aiight...you have a pop filter...

jea this is a dope mainstream song right here...this would be dope for the radio and shit.....jea this shit is hot fo sho....good flow.....and good lyrics of course...but i know you would come hot...shit...your senser...niggaz love ya here....word....Hot shit keep it up 8/10

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Lord. Wun

uppin this for you.

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iight coo good looks..1ne..

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aiight, listening~good beat choice, this shit is hot....lol@ "senser muthafuckaaaaa" your trademark...nice flow on this track, good voice....dope so far...nice lyrics as well, wow, you killed this beat, i liked your voice fluctuations too, great job.1

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I liked that song, "bitch get in my car"

but yeah, you need a filter or somethin. but I like this outside the hissin, best song I've heard on here in a while. I'd like to hear it with better quality, and shit if you can do that I'll put it on my mixtape. let me kno, if you have the vocals I can fix them as well so pm me

jea its diff and i liked it, good shit fam
hiss's are the only thing i can hear that stand out, otherwise its dope
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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

beat is coo

i like the delivery here...good

and voice fit the flow

nice 1

listenin...
beat is real dope
voice is hella nice!
lyrics were nice, sounds more commercial type
flow and delivrey is on point
mic presence is hott also
overall this ish is hott as fuck! haha

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ohh this kanye shit..i coiuld have got this beat i didnt want it though.....ok lyrics are kinda simplistic but thats a good thing because niggas is stupid(i spit simple most of the time to0)....flow is pretty good feelin your delivery...u got a whisper thing goin on with your voice nahmean ive peeped one of your tracks before i feel your emotion could be upped just a little more but first verse was pretty cool homie... hook is aight...

2nd ohhhhhhhhhh lol homie i was about to say your flow wasnt as flunet as the first verse but then u went off homie lol... lines were str8 nahmean ...solid drop right here dawg props on work keep elevating doin u


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178661

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aight fam lyrics were coo on this joint...delivery was pretty good...you actually remind me of this b-more cat thats tryna get his buz...flow was pretty good yea in the 2nd verse closer to the end you started spittin homey...quality is good...overall this was a good track...keep spittin fam...peace

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damn this track got some real good feedback back..thx alot all of yall its very much appreciated and about the hissin man i wish i would of kept the session open but since i did this track super fast i mean super fast i aint really think to save any thin but its all hood na'mean..and im still uppin for this holla at cha boi 1ne...

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