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Pretty Nice Lyrcially Good Nice Overall Here Wasnt Feeling The Beat Not Enough Hype In It Sun But You Handled It Well Nice Hook Too

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yeh nice beat..............you rode the beat real good, but you didn't really say anything that makes you want to play it back. but your vox were on with the beat. I don't kno if I really feel the hook though. It was ok, wasn't real catchy like a hook should b, like that sing a long shit that dmx does, you could do shit like that not as aggressive, but you could do that sing a long rap if you wanted to. You have a good rap voice with a good beat and you rode the beat. I give it a B. I'm goin to check out more of your shit though tonite

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The beat was a loop so it explains why it somewhat blan...beat it was a beat if you were hyper couldn't made work....but the hook was way too laid back....the lyrics was ah'ight you had a couple good lines but was too generic..I was waiting for a punchline on a unique concept but you jus had good flips on old concepts...the track was cool...to the general public this would be great..whcih is what really matters but to people that really listen to rap it was subpar...not wack but just average.....I know u can do better...no hate jus realness............1

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straight fire man. you switched your flow up alot within this song. thats what i like lately, im into that "switch flow every couple of bars" ish rite now. made it stand out, like stated before this beat wasnt the greatest but still not a bad beat at all and as long as you can work it its legitimate. def came with it, from the earlier songs i peeped by you to now i see a big elevation period comin, you already elevated alot in such a short amount of time. i showed my mans ur track with 20 grand and he never has nothing good to say about any of the net mc's i show him and he absolutely loooooved your shit so keep it poppin fresh pimpin. holla at me sometime to throw down some flame!

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Yo Senser, peep this, I cleaned up the hisses, and I want to put this on my mixtape, is that cool?

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