Battle Rules:

3-4 Barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-03-05 at 05:10 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MjGrEeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 05:11 PM.

This bitch is slow, verse finished...before he even wrote his 'name'
Your lyrics is like your name..unheard,the same as your 'RV Fame'
You pray twice a day...begging for a better 'vocab'
Your skill is like your balls.....too small to 'grab'/

Its funny that you found the guts.....to challenge me,
Your skill is 'padlocked'...and you cant find the 'key'
Your a football, round white and low to the 'floor'
Your skills need pills....you should go take some 'more'/

I fucked your girl...while you was out.....'tryin ta spit'
She moaned that i was much better...than her previous 'shit'
We fucked in your bed, she gave head, sucked, then 'said'
"Ma bo's flow is so low hes always 'dis-respect-ed'/

I already won this battle...your the defeated 'fighter'
Verses see bite marks...and your a serial 'Biter'
Your a wanted cheater, rappers want you shot
Your lyrics are shitty....even worse than 'J-Dot'

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Da_Throwdest has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-05 05:25 PM.

he claims illness, yet this homo's soft as "Sherbet"
bomb ya whole fuckin' town & commit "Mass-Murder"

suppose 2 b a vet but no shows in ur battles..? What a Clown..!
Bitch, i've just began "Wreck-An-Ise" like i was D-Lo Brown

hit u with hooks from every angle, right...left collisions
watch me make an example out of "MjGreen" like dictionary definitions

..& u a grown fuckin' man?? Bitch, u a kid please..!
cuz Jez, it ain't hard 2 c that "Fran's-A-Sis" like Steve

This ones in the bag for sho...good try tho but ur rec is good and i expected more..no offense

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Voted For: Da_Throwdest

easily took this...mjgreen how are you gonna set da rules and then break um on the 3-4 bars thing???it dont matter throw ripped you.....your verse waz too basic you need to work on your vocab a lil more.....
da_throwdest you had nice vocab nice structure punches were hittin good......mj you had a decent structure too

Voted For: MjGrEeN

okay...dis battle was alrite no creativity from really from nun of u

opener-mj good opener kind of a personal and multi...throw u forced dat bar da ryhme so dat made it weak

structure-throw stop seperatin ya lines fukks up ya flow

punchlines-mj took dis 1 he had a couple of em nothin spectacular...an throw i wasn't feelin nun of ur's

creativity-nun from u both

personals-nun from u both...

finisher-wasn't really feelin nun but mj's was betta...throw whut da fuk did u mean by dat line

enjoyed-mj i think he was consistant threw out dis whole battle...thorw work on ya shit fam get creative and stop forcin shit 2 ryhme


return da favor links r in my sig

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"Wordz Ahgod has DECLINED this battle on 12-20-06 09:49 PM.

This thread has been automatically closed."

^^he's scared.lol

Voted For: MjGrEeN

soft as sherbert????
that is uhmmm.....forced, an uncreative, an i dont like your whole structure of 2 bars, then a space, it dosent flow at all, its like your trynna tell jokes an not rhyme, so no Throwdest, ya dont get this battle, be more witty in your rhymes, an structure it ALOT Better, an you'll be alright

MJ, Ya flow was alright, few decent personals, wasnt feelin that J-Dot line, but other then that, it was pretty nice, not the best by any means, but enough ta get u my vote

return the fave

Peace

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Yeh i'm still kinda new with this....still learning...text is harder than audio....i may do audio soon...i found tha Kingz thing funny that Hotshot is 15 and the pic shows him and his description says 6 foot..no way hes baby faced as well lol

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fucc dat bullshit cuz they sum hataz neway but still uppin 4 sum unbiased votes

So you think your vgerse is better than mine, mine was consistent,ur didn't even rhyme on sum bits...sorry to spoil ur record mayn

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