http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177354
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1989024

ight drop honest feedback n leave links to your songs i'll give feedback

www.rideinconline.com/jamroom/bands/165
(at the top now.)

The song- I needed to know what it sounded like recorded or whatever so i recorded some of it...and the ending of it sounds real weird i dont know what happened but oh well just the sloppy Copy and wanted advice on whether its a good topic or song .

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aight vocals are to loud...quality needs work...holla at me and i'll help you with that...flow was aight...kinda feel off at a few point...lyrics were felt...real shit yamean......delivery was ok...breathe control problems here and there....rhyme scheme was good...just need some polishing...i

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it waz an aight track you had a nice flow nice lyrics like da man said above me you vocals were to loud dats da only thing bad about it dont kno why its gettin slept on

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voice to loud.............i was feelin the rhyme scheme, except maybe some problems, like when you come back in, it is at a different level. I don't have a lot to say that hasn't been said. I don't think it should get slept on, but its got potential. I will post more later when i hear more of your shit, peace

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179543

werd thnx for replies...and yea i agree vocals pretty damn loud and the other problem is the last end of it where it sound like i recorded with something else.i dunno what happened there but i'll be doing this song over soon

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Vocals are WAY too high. You need a pop filter badly. The lyrics were solid and stuck to a point for the most part. Stepped off the topic once in a while. Flow was on and worked well enough to keep me listening. Half way through your first verse your audio qual changed and sounded liek you were speaking from inside a shoebox. You gotta work on your fadeouts. All your tracks I've heard end abruptly like the feds came in and shut your shit down when you were reocording. May as well do it right - only takes a sec.

Good track so far, but needs more - at least another verse, or a chorus at the least.

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aight well you know most of the crits you need gurl, I gotta say the flow wasn't bad tho for sure, the best thing you can do is just keep ripping it and drop more tracks, alot less femcee's then emcee's so come up quick and mad peeps will want to collab with you

peace

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word doom. i dont even know what happened...where it sounds different...i had went to bed before i finished it..woke up and tried to finish and shit was recording all weird..but for right now i dont know how to do all that turning down vocals n shit. so when i re-do it imma just end up sending it to someone to fix all up that goes for the rest as well..and yea i record in peices for most of my songs...lung power aint as good as it shuold be..plus i think its cuz i put so many words in a line.... thnx for feedback tho

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yo I like this track and the whole meaning of it only thing wrong is the mic quality and the volume of your vocals

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