hot shit i whipped up man..yall should feel this..nothin to spectacular lyrically but its a smooth track so drop feed back when you doin peepin holla 1ne...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/w...olume1music.htm

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*listening*

I'm feeling the beat. Your vocals were al ittle loud on the Chorus in the beginning. LMAO @ "I'm gonna shine like a bald head.....that gots no hair." This was a cool track man......if you ever wanna collab or anything, hit me up

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Needs a bit more hiss protection. Lyrics were pretty nice. Rhyme scheme varied which needless to say was good. Same for the flow. It fell off literally once out of the whole first verse. Twice in the second - but the track was nice man. If I hadn't heard the original I'd have been on this one pretty hard. One of the few cats on this board that sees the big picture. Track dosen't stand out as far as content goes - but it's still a good track. Keep up. 1

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im feeln dis, i liked ur vocals quality, not as many hisss's still a few doe
good flow and delevery for the beat choice
a diff typa beat to flow to
good lyrics like ussual
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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

soundclick is being gay send me the track tommorow

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Ok Wasnt Really Feeling This Probally Cuz I Been Listening To Why I Rap This Mean Which Completly Overshadows Thiis Badly This Is Kinda Weak Wasnt Feeling The Hook Or Lyrics Beat And Hook Is Ok Sun But Track Is Mediocre For You Dope For Most The Rest Of Rv

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listenin...
vocals sound kinds loud, still good tho
voice is dope as fuck
flow and delivery is on point also
sounds more gangster ish haha
overall a pretty nice track

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good looks on the feedback yall i appreciate that lots iight well imma drop some other shit on yall and peep some of these other cats track holla 1ne...

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ACTUALLY ive listened to a few tracks ya did and i agree lyriclly not your best but flow wise was real solid and i like the beat alot chorus was decent a lil hight to start but over all a decent lil joint ya got here man holla back on my Tremendous~Verse

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yo ya shit is always tight.......lol flow is tight.....lyrics are coo....i also liked the chorus....keep droppin fire man

listening to it right now.. Im really feeling the beat.. very nice beat.. yea ur right..the lyrics isn't great but nice flow.. this is a song i'd hear in a station in my area where they play underground songs.. its pretty good man.. very nice flow now.. the chorus is pretty good pretty good.. overall nice song.. now i have an idea of what to put in my song lol..thanx .. 9/10.. good job.. wun

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