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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
the kid 523 5 100.00%
wanadienigga 0 0%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 03-13-05, 12:38 AM   #1
wanadienigga
New to RV
 
the kid 523 vs wanadienigga

IP: 3009 D57F

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3 bars

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-16-05 at 12:38 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.
 
Old 03-13-05, 12:39 AM   #2
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the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 12:39 AM.
 
Old 03-13-05, 12:40 AM   #3
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wanadienigga has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 12:40 AM.
 
Old 03-13-05, 12:44 AM   #4
wanadienigga
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IP: 3009 D57F

I'm tired of listening and reading about cats that claim they can rap
when all they talk about is hoes, money they ain't got and heat that
they can't pack so just face the facts all yall is whack nigga my little
brother could rip all yall on a track my bass thump so loud it will flip
all yall on ya back so you could turn in your grave my rhymes so hot
that before you start reading them they burn in your face so now you
know that your whole journey's a waste you can hang up freestlyling
before they turn your way and then just turn you away......
 
Old 03-13-05, 12:46 AM   #5
the kid 523
Flyweight
 
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IP: 20B2 DF4A

This is your first post, sorry you had to battle me
Too bad Rv doesnt have " The Worst Noob MVP"

When im done with you, no one will ever support you
Ill make your fat mom wish that her fat ass aborted you

Im so hot im about to make my computer short ciruit
Your name is wack yo this shit fits you perfect!
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Old 03-13-05, 12:49 AM   #6
Wicked One
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From: Harrisburg, PA
IP: 7BE2 A0A1

Voted For: the kid 523

Aight short battle here.....But Wanadienigga.....your verse was decent...plus you had some aight punches..but most were played n weak....The Kid 523 got this cuz he just had way better punches i thought..........
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Old 03-13-05, 12:52 AM   #7
Germ
in your system
 
From: Adanac
This was feedback posted for the kid 523

IP: 9E2F CDE8

^ fuckin bitch, your just copyin the line i used against you....

"first day on RV, and already you're ruining your career
stepping up to vets, too bad there aint dumbest rookie of the year"

your an idiot kid, but at least you figured out how to structure a verse
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Old 03-13-05, 12:54 AM   #8
High-Dro
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From: Bridgewater, Nova Scotia, Canada
IP: EDE3 0451

Voted For: the kid 523

well...the kid 523 - ur flow was good, ur punches were pretty decent, lay off the mom stuff tho, it's played..but yea, ur's was ok

wannadienigga - your shit had no structure at all..u basically just wrote a paragraph..it makes it practically impossible to understand what's goin on..and at first it didn't even seem like it was a battle...it seemed like it should be in an open mic

therfore my vote - the kid 523

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Old 03-13-05, 01:37 AM   #9
Cocaine
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IP: 258C A279

Voted For: the kid 523

This is your first post, sorry you had to battle me
Too bad Rv doesnt have " The Worst Noob MVP"
wack, punch wasnt hittin
When im done with you, no one will ever support you
Ill make your fat mom wish that her fat ass aborted you
no...[/n]
Im so hot im about to make my computer short ciruit
Your name is wack yo this shit fits you perfect!
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this was a weak battle here, but 523 took this one tho
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Old 03-13-05, 11:11 PM   #10
Op!n!on
This is my first post!
 
IP: 9E2F CDE8

Voted For: wanadienigga

wanadienigga fuckin owned this guy

v/wanadienigga

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
 
Old 03-15-05, 04:13 PM   #11
B. Magik
Sam Dope
 
From: STL
This was feedback posted for the kid 523

IP: 0825 899A

Very wack battle...cant even vote on this shit...You both fucking suck...this is sad...and btw, kid 523, stop taking punches from 8 mile...
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Old 03-15-05, 04:24 PM   #12
rooq
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This was feedback posted for the kid 523

IP: 42C2 EFA3

not even gonna bother votin on this..yet again tha kid has managed to bite 8 mile

"make your mom wish that her fat ass aborted you"

pity, cos your first two lines and last two lines weren't too wack.
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Old 03-19-05, 10:38 AM   #13
the kid 523
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IP: 20B2 DF4A

upin this shit for more votes.....................
 
Old 03-20-05, 10:39 PM   #14
the kid 523
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IP: 20B2 DF4A

uppin for some more votes...........................
 
Old 03-22-05, 09:53 AM   #15
A_M_H
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: A3EA 639E

Voted For: the kid 523

Wanadienigga: found good balance in your vocab, structure was nice but your flow was off here and there. Emotion was good because of the personal vibe over it, not that much imagery, you had an "in your face" sort of attitude,saying everything like it was. So imagery and maybe vocab a lil could've been better...Overall good drop...

Tha Kid 523: very deep, had your flow on lock, vocab was tight and structure was good.Emotion was raw and you made me think about some things which is nice of course. Imagery was dope, enjoyed reading this for sure! Very good job!

Vote goes to da kid 523 because I was feeling the message a lil more, no hate...RTF please
 
 


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