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Check in by: 03-23-05 at 12:47 PM

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dfunk has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-23-05 12:18 PM.

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-23-05 12:22 PM.

Young Blaze you a lil' pussy bitch /
A.K.A Lil' Cease in court-room bein' a snitch /
Sellin' souls of niggaz for money you needin' /
I know your moms got a crack addiction - bitch be fiendin' /

But this nigga got even tougher problems /
Every time he picks up the mic he stumbles /
Nigga like Macy Gray - he got armpits like that bitches hair /

You couldn't rhyme proper if your life was on it /
That's not the mic nigga, thats my dick, get up off it /
Your life nigga - you don't own it - I'm in hood givin' 5 for it /

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dfunk

Spit awkward in strides,sum 1 betta extinguish my flamez off dis guy/
cuz im bout ta "Reign Supreme" like make n"Diana Ross fall from tha sky"/(she waz in tha supremes)
not evident,ya verze iz "Missin in Action" like "Prisoners of War"/
itz like ''U P S n tha morgue" merged cuz im guna "Deliver ur Corpse"/
funk iz a "Bird Brain" cuz im bout ta "Tar n Feather" hiz mind/
Develop n lines ta "Torch his verze" like he waz sent ta hell 4 a crime/
Ur absorb n dis "Heat" ya "Old Verze iz "Historically Weak"/
im "tha captain" of dis battle n i''ll give u a "tour of defeat"/
<<<<OKAY>>>>
I'm "killin-u-son",im bringin the heat like if u were "feelin-the-sun" so be ready to retire/
u and your homies are "not stars",this idiot tries to make "hot-bars" by liting a snickers on fire/

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Voted For: Young Blaze

ayo overall

Young Blaze: decent shit bruh, you came through with this one...Punches a few metas and a little historic background goin in there...

Work on: work on your structure bro...thats what you need right now...

DFunk: meh it was aiight, had some lines in there but now substance...

Workon: work on rapping overall....reccomend O.M.Bs multi tutorial....

V/Young Blaze...

RTF in the siggy....all honesty only aiight bros..i expect this from both of you....pz..

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dfunk

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Sorry dfunk, this is better than the other battle i seen of you but still some way to elevate to go yet.

dfunk's opener wasnt really good, the punch wasnt hitting very hard. You must remember man that the opener has to be one of the best bars of the verse. The closer was ok. nice meta about the dick and mic "get off it" -was dope but not a good closer. Ya punches are ok, not finishing off well is your biggest flaw. Word ya verse better, check out other battles and you'l learn. Stay up bro.

Young Blaze had a good opener, two metaphors in there and it connected well. Closer was ok aswel but i think you tried too hard with the metaphor the quality of the punch was let go a bit. You had some multis and personal i think with some really good punches and your flow was real good, easily read and enoyable

well done peeps

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No problem bro. I appriciate the input. I'm learning yo.

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dfunk

Voted For: Young Blaze

yo this one goes to young blaze

dfunk

your whole last verse ended in "it" and the macy gray line was wack lol no hate

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Voted For: Young Blaze

yB:
Spit awkward in strides,sum 1 betta extinguish my flamez off dis guy/
cuz im bout ta "Reign Supreme" like make n"Diana Ross fall from tha sky"/(she waz in tha supremes)
^^^DOPE OPENER...IF U WOULDN'T EXPLAINED IT NIGGAZ WOULDN'T OF GOT IT
not evident,ya verze iz "Missin in Action" like "Prisoners of War"/
itz like ''U P S n tha morgue" merged cuz im guna "Deliver ur Corpse"/
^^^UHH OKAY
funk iz a "Bird Brain" cuz im bout ta "Tar n Feather" hiz mind/
Develop n lines ta "Torch his verze" like he waz sent ta hell 4 a crime/
^^^FLOW WAS GOOD N DA MULTI BUT DA PUNCH WAS WACK
Ur absorb n dis "Heat" ya "Old Verze iz "Historically Weak"/
im "tha captain" of dis battle n i''ll give u a "tour of defeat"/
^^GOOD PUNCH
<<<>>>
I'm "killin-u-son",im bringin the heat like if u were "feelin-the-sun" so be ready to retire/
u and your homies are "not stars",this idiot tries to make "hot-bars" by liting a snickers on fire/
^^^WEAK...IT STARTED OFF HOTT TILL DAT SNICKER SHIT..

funk:
Young Blaze you a lil' pussy bitch /
A.K.A Lil' Cease in court-room bein' a snitch /
^^LOL..UMM DIS WAS OKAY
Sellin' souls of niggaz for money you needin' /
I know your moms got a crack addiction - bitch be fiendin' /
^^LOL...DIS SHIT WAS WACK FAM

But this nigga got even tougher problems /
Every time he picks up the mic he stumbles /
^^STUMBLES N PROBLEMS..DONT RYHME

Nigga like Macy Gray - he got armpits like that bitches hair /
You couldn't rhyme proper if your life was on it /
^^^????

That's not the mic nigga, thats my dick, get up off it /
Your life nigga - you don't own it - I'm in hood givin' 5 for it /
^^^WACK...

NUFF SAID BLAZE TAKES DIS EASY...FUNK STEP YA GAME UP

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^^he's scared.lol