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03-29-05, 07:25 PM
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"End of the Road"
IP: 073B 523F
...End Of The Line... ...Time To Die... ...Give Up... ...Sleep... ...Rest... ...Release... .................... I know what I must do...no matter how bad it hurts... I don't know why it's like this...why couldn't it just work..? I have to end me and you...there is no point to continue... I'm giving away something...everything we've been through... You truly did bring out the best...of all my feelings inside.... You truly helped me survive...you helped me to stay alive... I wish things were different...I wish I didn't have to do this... All the plans we had...our house...our car...even our two kids... A mansion with a pool...a Viper, with Bridgette and Tyrese... This pain is like a comet hitting me...burning crater a mile deep... I love you to death...but you broke my heart, and cheated... I wanna stop breathin'...because inside I feel so defeated... Everything that was promised...all the hope that was left... I have to break up with you...but God, I love you to death...! I don't wanna loose you...because you are my universe... But I just gotta realize, out of all, the truth hurts the worst... But I gotta move on...just be strong, just live and face facts... Oh no worries...I WILL be kicking Troy and Brandon Monz's ass! I don't care if Troy has a gun...he can up and point at my face... Will show how pussy he really is...I'll lay him to fuckin' waste! Give him a fuckin' taste...a piece of me resembling a demon... I will destroy his fucking soul....not just hurt is fuckin feelings! And Brandon Monz..? Haha...dick is prolly small, in proportion... I'ma kick his ass so bad...make his mom wish she had an abortion! Haha...and if that don't work...I'll bring a gun, just lock and load... It's time to rock and roll...cause I know this the end of the road... |
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03-29-05, 07:31 PM
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Metropolis
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IP: B52C 6258
um i was a lil confused on what u were talkin about, ig uess i wouldnt be if i knew hwo those peeps were. but pretty good drop, nice story n everything. good depiction of what was goin on. pretty decent flow sometimes some if if started to go off on a tangent here nt here. but overall i give it a 7.5/10 o keep doin ya thing...1
RTF please link is in the sig |
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03-29-05, 08:16 PM
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L.E
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IP: 073B 523F
^^I will get to that...heres a link, I'll edit with more...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2057879 |
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03-30-05, 12:35 AM
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good stuff
IP: 28AD 5545
hey man, i liked it. could definitely feel strong emotions. took a big change of pace at the "oh no worries," but good. i'm new at this, so take it for what its worth, but i give ya an 8 outta 10.
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