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MaRVJay1009 5 100.00%
Nephew J 0 0%
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Old 03-28-05, 08:15 PM   #16
Ryan Hughes
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From: Jerzy
IP: 23D2 FCA9

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

V/marvjay1009.....this was an ight battle but he gets my vote cause he came wit creative punchs an good structure wit good personals....nep u came wit sum ight lines but u were to basic u need to work on ur punchs an personals...No hate...RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=m
closer=m
structure=m
punchs=m
personals=m
vocab=m
overall=marvjay1009
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Old 03-29-05, 10:02 AM   #17
MaRVJay
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
 
From: NyC,QUeENS EaRLy!
IP: 0825 899A

okay upppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn
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Old 03-29-05, 06:32 PM   #18
Young Drama
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From: South Central Kali
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Marv in ma crew so i cant vote....................
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Old 03-30-05, 12:08 AM   #19
MaRVJay
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
 
From: NyC,QUeENS EaRLy!
IP: 28AD 5545

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Old 03-30-05, 03:27 AM   #20
MC Virtuoso
New to RV
 
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From: aus
IP: DEEC 8168

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Nephew- 1st off it's not neccasary to number your bars. Anyway your structure was decent and flow was pretty good. Saying you'll fuck his mum is played to the max. No really clever or original concepts. Lol whats with mentioning crunk juice so often. Anyway you need to elivate your punches.

MarvJay- I enjoyed reading your verse basicaly every line was dope.
nice multi's on this one

u should of know dont go at jay he's a vet,i'll merk u with my weakest text...
i'll heat-ya-flesh if i squeeze-a-tech ya breathin left...homie u meetin-death

Overall Marv had this easy simply because his punches and word play was better Nephew up ya game and you'll be dope. return the favor plz !!!!!
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Old 03-30-05, 10:21 AM   #21
MaRVJay
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From: NyC,QUeENS EaRLy!
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Old 03-30-05, 10:34 AM   #22
Cinema
Light Weight
 
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Iight Yo Marv What Happend Cus Thiss Wasn't Like Tha Rest Of Ya Battles You Gave Him Some Slacc But You Still Took Thiss..........

Openor=Marv,He Had Wordplay And A Ok Punch
Punches=Tie,Both Had Some Ok Punches
Vocab-None
Personals-Marv,Had 1 Or 2 Personals
Structure-None
Wordplay-Marv,Had A Couple Lines
Closer-Marv,Had A Nice Punch And Good Personal

Overall Marv Took Thiss He Had Better Personals Good Wordplay And A Few Nice Punches..Marv Next Time Yo Don't Give Nobody Some Slacc................

/V Marvjay1009.......................
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