yo....ive been droppin open mics there and then
but im gonna be gone for a lil bit till i return again
just need a lil time 2 sit down with my pad n' pen
& this open mic forum might die down without me
but for every hata that always liked ta doubt me
FUCK YOU.. because what i'm spitting is honesty
u honestly cant think u can top what my shit be
i might stop typing, butt never will i stop writing
you'll never catch me biting & dont call me hiding
or you and me will be fighting im quite freightning
cuz when i come at u i come faster than lightning
ive beefed & everyone believed but who'd imagined
that i would catch Deuce in a damn beaty pageant
so go ahead type thiss o.m up with ur gutter trash
and see what happens when you and me just clash
went and put my every earned cash in my rv stash
you know without me this site alone will just crash

i'm out of here butt nott four permanent
talk shit and gett hurt and burnt in shitt
u suck and i don't im not that unfortunate
and i'ma be back so keep an eye out for it

i started out and sucked but gotta admit i elevated
i been through problems and some beef, been hated
butt i sat down and concentrated even collaborated
so say wut u say whether u think im gay or outdated
u know u cant deny it that u cant wait 4 me 2 retry it
now let's see all of your exitement and ur delightment
now on ima perfect my lyrics even if i have 2 rewrite it
and none of you muthafuckas out there better bite it
im on some grown men shit i'm the rapverse luetenent
i waste all of this gay bent shit, leave your throats slit
i'ma work my way ta perfection and get all the attention
all this shit's my life with my skillz as all of my protection
so leave feed on how you miss me, or just go & diss me
so i'ma hand on the baton to Excell and OneStepBeyond
so whether you sleepers even respond or don't respond
this'll be the last hook in a while that i'll drop in the pond


i'm out of here butt nott four permanent
talk shit and gett hurt and burnt in shitt
u suck and i don't im not that unfortunate
and i'ma be back so keep an eye out for it

cheaaaa fam dope drop nice lines i was feelin ya dogg peace see when ya come back
ill hol it down for u bro,fukk tha haterz u right.....holla cuz

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It's Murdah now, not murder.

thanx ca$per...uppin yo

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183844
there's my link

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Pretty tight fam, liken the whole haters n shit, brush it off

nice shyt overall fam, see ya when ya return


holla

good drop fam...i feel u on takin a lil time off for a bit...im doin it too...its kinda hard for tha first week lmao...but u'll get used to jus writtin sumwhere else than tha internet...

*self promotion!*
...i'll be back dis weekend or even sooner!...look out

lmao...but its good shit hood...stay up homie

-DB

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thanx yo i need some time off if u know what i mean i might be off for a week or two im not sure but yo thanx and i didnt put my full talent in this cuz i was really tired at the time so hard for ideas ta flow but ya'll got the point and when i do come back i'll have a dope ass drop for ya'll to look forward too i already got a verse written along witht he hook i just need two more verses and its an honest one everything in it happened in my life or is happening so yo till then i'm uppin on this piece....

damn man nice drop...shit was fire...flow was ill nie structure....good way to leave lol..better than mine haha...ok it wasnt but it was still fire

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werd uppin this shit for my boi.............................

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It's Murdah now, not murder.

uppin.....................

does anybody ever notice that im uppin on my shit especially the last open mic (for a while) god damn i need some feed

yo fo real give my boi sum feed yall....................

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it was a good way to go out, pretty good drop, you really pulled it off