upppppinnnnnnnnnn................................. ................

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damn itz been bouta week and still no votez....??
uppin
com'on on anybody jus voteee

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"...if u eva see a gangsta in hang cuffz
shit iz probably cuz he anit give hiz man up,
or hiz man wuznt man enuff
so he gave hiz man up..."

Voted For: mizz fyre

miss fyre
Of RV you want out, your mouth runs more than a tap
questions in your name asking Y DA L RAP?*
so wack, tried for 6, but still got no crew
LS says no, and CS just wouldn't "P.I.C" you
trash talking ladyrapper, talents somethin' she's missin'
says you ain't no topical head but still no good at dissin'
so listen fool, on this site you got more haters than ja rule
i serve you faster than waiters do...so keep your lyrical skills just for school

*her name backwards lady rap......Y DA L RAP

like all da punches
real good verse
easy2 read
good structure
jus elevate a little bit
real good 4 a gurl

8.5/10

lady rapper
sit bac & note diz, u think da "devil" wrote diz? "hell" naw itz GOD~SENT//
Ya juz mad cuz u prayed fo skillz & neva GOT~DEM

u musta been outa fuckin mind, musta been high//
callin me out bitch, i rock u 2 sleep cryin, and sing u a lullaby

Even in the dark, I'm still gon' shine u cant tell itz night//
miss fyre is lyk a VAMPIRE, she anit eva seen da LIGHT

ull neva recover, mah flow iz lyk AID's//
urz iz mo lyk a 24 hour bug, goes away in less den a day

on da mic i tear lil "misses" apart and im 2 cold fo em 2 feel me//
go crazy on em and lyrically smack dem bicthez silly

ur in da wrong place, im rollin in da upperclass section//
u startin 2 IRRITATE me lyk a mutha fuckin yeast INFECTION

I serve it 2 ya coward ass & bac hand ya lyk we playin a game of tennis//
Act lyk u want some of this and Ill give u da business

lyk bleach im leavin a perminate stain//
afta diz battle u anit leavin lookin da same

mah rhymez are lyk packed TEFLON//
grl if u hatin on me u mine az well give up cuz u anit "GUN" get long

Im da hottest bitch on diz board yet ima beginner//
u wack and anit bringin nuttin new 2 da "table" lyk ya "left ova dinner"

im da #1 Lady Rapper, ya jus a chicken head//
once dey read mah rhymez dey gun 4get wut YOU said

playin round wit fyre grl u gun get burnt, drop u on a POT//
let u fry lyk "baccon" cuz itz da only time u'll b SIZZLING HOT

bout 2 get chrushed by a fly chick//
i got sum "dirt on mah shoulderz" now bitch "brush it"

da only time shes good "ORALY" is when shes SUCKIN A DICK//
bitch stayz on her kneez, got bad dieseases, cuz she juz a piece a shit

lyk da idea of ur parentz keepin ya, u rappin wuz a mistake//
kinda lyk 9/11 u alwayz remember diz date

real long verse
not dat many punches
elevate more
work on structure
dont try and fit 2 many lyrics in 1 line

no hate 7/10

my v/miss fyre

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aight thnax for voting...........uppin ya'll...........

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yea aight thankz... sum1 finally voted lol
still uppin itz been real long
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"...if u eva see a gangsta in hang cuffz
shit iz probably cuz he anit give hiz man up,
or hiz man wuznt man enuff
so he gave hiz man up..."

uppin ya'll............................................. ...

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uppin ya'll............................................. ...

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uppin ya'll....lets rap this one up...........................

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Voted For: mizz fyre

iight i think mizzfire got this one

Mizz fire
Had good personals out of all of them the best was:
so wack, tried for 6, but still got no crew
LS says no, and CS just wouldn't "P.I.C" you

Structure was good, punches connected well

Ladyrapper-Verse was okay.Lines were a little overstrected.I dont really like the whole gun scheme goin on tho..

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^^^^thanx for votin...............uppin..................

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Voted For: mizz fyre

mizz fyre:
Of RV you want out, your mouth runs more than a tap
questions in your name asking Y DA L RAP?*
^^^LOL VERY CLEVA I WAS FEELIN DIS
so wack, tried for 6, but still got no crew
LS says no, and CS just wouldn't "P.I.C" you
^^OKAY PERSONAL
trash talking ladyrapper, talents somethin' she's missin'
says you ain't no topical head but still no good at dissin'
^^DECENT DISS
so listen fool, on this site you got more haters than ja rule
i serve you faster than waiters do...so keep your lyrical skills just for school
^^WEAK CLOSER MAH...
lady:
sit bac & note diz, u think da "devil" wrote diz? "hell" naw itz GOD~SENT//
Ya juz mad cuz u prayed fo skillz & neva GOT~DEM
^^DECENT OPENER
u musta been outa fuckin mind, musta been high//
callin me out bitch, i rock u 2 sleep cryin, and sing u a lullaby
^^WEAK

Even in the dark, I'm still gon' shine u cant tell itz night//
miss fyre is lyk a VAMPIRE, she anit eva seen da LIGHT
^^SECOND LINE WAS GOOD...

ull neva recover, mah flow iz lyk AID's//
urz iz mo lyk a 24 hour bug, goes away in less den a day
^^^GOOD CONCEPT..COULD OF WORDED IT BETTA

on da mic i tear lil "misses" apart and im 2 cold fo em 2 feel me//
go crazy on em and lyrically smack dem bicthez silly
^^WEAK

ur in da wrong place, im rollin in da upperclass section//
u startin 2 IRRITATE me lyk a mutha fuckin yeast INFECTION
^^^NAH

I serve it 2 ya coward ass & bac hand ya lyk we playin a game of tennis//
Act lyk u want some of this and Ill give u da business
^^^WEAK

lyk bleach im leavin a perminate stain//
afta diz battle u anit leavin lookin da same

mah rhymez are lyk packed TEFLON//
grl if u hatin on me u mine az well give up cuz u anit "GUN" get long

Im da hottest bitch on diz board yet ima beginner//
u wack and anit bringin nuttin new 2 da "table" lyk ya "left ova dinner"

im da #1 Lady Rapper, ya jus a chicken head//
once dey read mah rhymez dey gun 4get wut YOU said

playin round wit fyre grl u gun get burnt, drop u on a POT//
let u fry lyk "baccon" cuz itz da only time u'll b SIZZLING HOT

bout 2 get chrushed by a fly chick//
i got sum "dirt on mah shoulderz" now bitch "brush it"

da only time shes good "ORALY" is when shes SUCKIN A DICK//
bitch stayz on her kneez, got bad dieseases, cuz she juz a piece a shit

lyk da idea of ur parentz keepin ya, u rappin wuz a mistake//
kinda lyk 9/11 u alwayz remember diz date



AIGHT..FUKK DAT MAH U GOT 2 MANY LINES....IM GOIN WITH FYRE CUZZ SHE HAD SOME PERSONALS AND SHE DIDN'T NEED DAT MUCH LINES DA GET HER POINT ACROSS...LADY U LOOK LIKE U GOT SOME POTENTIAL JUST LEARN HOW DA WORD YA BARS...

RETURN DA FAVOR...ON MY BATTLE VS CINEMA

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^^he's scared.lol