I be ~slappin emcees~on a mic,Im ~rappin wit ease~
~clappin ya knees~call da police cuz Im ~jackin u thieves~
They say I got a ~rappin disease~cause Im ~graspin da lead~
and Ill spit dis sick shit til u throw up and be ~askin ta leave~
Just ~sick wit a mic~sometimes just ~spit what I like~
other times,keep writin and dont pay attention ta ~shit dat I write~
dese niggas is a ~rappin disgrace~ straight ~wack and misplaced~
Ill spit til he shits on himself,then take it and throw it ~back in his face~
I be dat krazy dude who've ~stolen ya eyelidz~u aint ~hopin fa violence~
my linez make u be quiet at a concert,then yell durin a ~moment of silence~
Dont act like ya unreachable cause ya ~real limits near you~
Ill make u scream til ya lungs collapse and yell back "I ~still did'nt hear you~
Teachin me how ta stunt,shit,he ~teaches 1 lesson barely~
I ~releases da message scary~til u feel dat ya ~speech is unneccessary~
Ill put u on a ~skillet til ya flamed~cause Im da ~realest in da game~
and my name gonna stay here for a while so ~steel it in ya brain~

Reppin Horrorflick to da fullest..................................

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread=184555

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not bad..flow is on point..good use of multis..vocab is nice..structure is good..its nothing special but its a solid drop..try incorperating metaphores and wordplay within your verses..but other than that..good drop man..

Return the favor.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184555
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184554
Pz.

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I dont know how ta drop a link..............

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just reply to someone elses open mic and take the link from thier post, copy it, and paste it into this thread somewhere either in a new post or edit it into your original post..

Pz.

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aight,more feedback please...........................

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~The Future of Hip Hop is Now~

Pretty sik shit man...Good use of multies...Good flow...This shit was very creative, and I'm feelin it...You're pretty hot fam...We should collab sometime...Holla at me man...1

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Thanx yall.......Ill get back at you wit dat collab Black Magik........
More feedback please

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~The Future of Hip Hop is Now~

More feedback please

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yo this was pretty hot bruh...structure was a little stretched but wasn't bad..folw was cool, nice multi's and meat's...you got skills can't deny it...Check out Emerica's Finest bruh...8/10...return the favor...

P.S. You can get a link from rtf onmy track then postin it herel lol we both win!

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Im bout ta leave but I got u tomorrow dawg....................

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~The Future of Hip Hop is Now~

uppin.............................................

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uppin............................................

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yo this was hella nice,very good,bet your a vet lol hidin as a nooby,but if your a newby well your gonna be dope,its like the structure is hot,everything is dope on it lol,good to see a dope newby

return the favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185080