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04-01-05, 02:32 PM | #1 | |||||
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Young Mix
IP: 35BE D2AB
I be ~slappin emcees~on a mic,Im ~rappin wit ease~
~clappin ya knees~call da police cuz Im ~jackin u thieves~ They say I got a ~rappin disease~cause Im ~graspin da lead~ and Ill spit dis sick shit til u throw up and be ~askin ta leave~ Just ~sick wit a mic~sometimes just ~spit what I like~ other times,keep writin and dont pay attention ta ~shit dat I write~ dese niggas is a ~rappin disgrace~ straight ~wack and misplaced~ Ill spit til he shits on himself,then take it and throw it ~back in his face~ I be dat krazy dude who've ~stolen ya eyelidz~u aint ~hopin fa violence~ my linez make u be quiet at a concert,then yell durin a ~moment of silence~ Dont act like ya unreachable cause ya ~real limits near you~ Ill make u scream til ya lungs collapse and yell back "I ~still did'nt hear you~ Teachin me how ta stunt,shit,he ~teaches 1 lesson barely~ I ~releases da message scary~til u feel dat ya ~speech is unneccessary~ Ill put u on a ~skillet til ya flamed~cause Im da ~realest in da game~ and my name gonna stay here for a while so ~steel it in ya brain~ Reppin Horrorflick to da fullest.................................. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread=184555
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Horrorflick Entertainment............. ~The Future of Hip Hop is Now~ Last edited by Young Mix : 04-01-05 at 03:34 PM. |
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04-01-05, 02:46 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: E3C9 F7CB
not bad..flow is on point..good use of multis..vocab is nice..structure is good..its nothing special but its a solid drop..try incorperating metaphores and wordplay within your verses..but other than that..good drop man..
Return the favor. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184555 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184554 Pz.
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04-01-05, 03:04 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 3240 794D
I need 1 link , to an OM' you have lft feedback on
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04-01-05, 03:17 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 35BE D2AB
I dont know how ta drop a link..............
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04-01-05, 03:23 PM | #5 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: E3C9 F7CB
just reply to someone elses open mic and take the link from thier post, copy it, and paste it into this thread somewhere either in a new post or edit it into your original post..
Pz.
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04-01-05, 03:34 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 35BE D2AB
aight,more feedback please...........................
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04-01-05, 04:23 PM | #7 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 0825 899A
Pretty sik shit man...Good use of multies...Good flow...This shit was very creative, and I'm feelin it...You're pretty hot fam...We should collab sometime...Holla at me man...1
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04-01-05, 06:57 PM | #8 | |||||
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IP: CBA2 2B09
Thanx yall.......Ill get back at you wit dat collab Black Magik........
More feedback please
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04-03-05, 10:21 PM | #9 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 7C0D E3A7
More feedback please
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04-03-05, 10:25 PM | #10 | |||||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 606D F99A
yo this was pretty hot bruh...structure was a little stretched but wasn't bad..folw was cool, nice multi's and meat's...you got skills can't deny it...Check out Emerica's Finest bruh...8/10...return the favor...
P.S. You can get a link from rtf onmy track then postin it herel lol we both win!
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04-03-05, 10:43 PM | #11 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: 7C0D E3A7
Im bout ta leave but I got u tomorrow dawg....................
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04-04-05, 02:14 PM | #12 | |||||
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IP: B1C9 2E9C
uppin.............................................
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04-05-05, 03:00 PM | #13 | |||||
New to RV
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IP: B1C9 2E9C
uppin............................................
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04-05-05, 03:09 PM | #14 | ||||
Hell yeah
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IP: 37BA F453
yo this was hella nice,very good,bet your a vet lol hidin as a nooby,but if your a newby well your gonna be dope,its like the structure is hot,everything is dope on it lol,good to see a dope newby
return the favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185080 |
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04-05-05, 08:04 PM | #15 | |||||
...fuck life.
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IP: 0825 899A
i liked this shit, wonderin why your record dont match up wit your talent though, but the multies were good, and so was bout everything else...but i DID feel like the verse started slowly fallin off at the end...but without that, this verse is good
7.5-8.5/10 |
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