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04-06-05, 12:22 PM | #1 | |||||
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Coming Soon: King n Queens (MaRVJay diss)
IP: 522A 016B
in school ill post it when i get home round 5
chea chea its gonna be tight! |
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04-06-05, 03:08 PM | #2 | |||||
Burnt face man
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IP: F245 DF6C
I'm sure it will be. Why have you hidden your record?
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04-07-05, 05:13 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: 1F84 1588
back in the days of old there were kings n queens
now theres Armada (A King) n MaRVJay (A Queen) I be rulin and runnin territory with a mighty fist MaRV sits back n shuts his mouth until i say spit I definitly got all the power to do what I please wheneva MaRv does anything, it comes threw me Ima flashback of the kings, Henry, Loui, McBeth MaRVs a flash back of the one bitch Queen Elisabeth He's tryin to run NY like his very own kingdom, WHAT his reign falls in to poverity,betrayal, he nuttin butta slut Nobody stays loyal to dis bitch, leave ya dead in ditches Like Henry the VIII, Back talk me I behead all my bitches When it all falls apart ya need a strong,powerful king like me ironic thing is the rv knows theres a queen livin in Queens Her Name is MaRVJay1009,she a waste of time, she aint mine Ill take over NY like Alexander did the world, jus give me time Risen up, Armada takin this world, n everything there is in it MaRYJay surrenderin to the power of the Baltimore Senate take hostile actions to easily throw dis bitch off her throne Havin her scared out of her wits, refusin to leave her home This queens got soldiers, but the problem is they from Queens Ill summin up the army of Armada, n make her whole city bleed decapitate every head thats on her block, stick them on pikes Burn the bodies in the town square, have the women turnin dike Have the soldiers lootin n pivelagin any goods this bitch has Ima burn queens to the ground wit a fire torch, oil and gas take MaRY captive n let the soldiers fuck here,spoils of war I burn witches at the stake, lets have fires consume this whore send Marv strait to hell, queens is no more, burnt to the ground after my victory, I still wear a frown, theres a Queen n every NY TOWN Ill burn the STATE to the ground, flush out the filth, ARMADA thas ME cuz in the days of the old and to this day KINGS OVERWHELM QUEENS! lol hahahaha leave feed I no u feelin it Last edited by Armada Da 187 : 04-07-05 at 06:45 PM. Reason: typo |
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04-07-05, 06:24 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 1F84 1588
uppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnn this bitch, leave some feed
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04-07-05, 06:37 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 1F84 1588
Upiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Give Me Feedback Or Hate Lmfao W/e
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04-07-05, 09:07 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 1F84 1588
Come On Fams Give Feedback On This Diss Uppppiiiiiinnnnnnnnn
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04-08-05, 02:50 AM | #7 | |||||
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 3240 794D
lmmaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo y nobody replyin? fukkin suck homo nigga u gota fetish of sayin marv and queens every nigga in queens a fukk ya pussy up
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04-08-05, 03:09 AM | #8 | ||||
<<NaMe ReTiReD>>
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IP: 538A BA27
this verse needed work...
especially if it was written n not just keyed off the dome no hate nucca but you said marvs name like 2 dozen times i think thats a bit much.....
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04-08-05, 11:56 AM | #9 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 522A 016B
thx for the feed gotta use marvs name fam dont want anyone thinkin im rappin bout anyone else
marv shhh now act like what u say u r A VET quit hatin on my disses like lil noob |
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04-08-05, 12:55 PM | #10 | |||||||
New to RV
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IP: EF63 F870
its alright next time try a different approach the king and queen thing didnt do it 4 me but it was coo
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04-08-05, 02:06 PM | #11 | |||||
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IP: 522A 016B
thx for the feed UPPPPPPPPIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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04-08-05, 03:24 PM | #12 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Like in the other piece this wasnt really hitten hard..
you need to learn to use better punchlines , some hard personals, maybe scoop up some info on marv your structure was good , ill give you that but thats basically all you had Sorry i really wasnt feeling this peice... elevate and keep it up ps: Drop a link or this will be closed
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04-09-05, 06:49 PM | #13 | |||||
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IP: 1F84 1588
link is at the bottom of my sig fam
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04-10-05, 01:49 PM | #14 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1F84 1588
close it up bones
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