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04-16-05, 02:33 PM
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Skadoosh!
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"Time In Prison"
IP: 9458 811B
"Time In Prison" Just That One Moment I Didn’t Think..Just Acted Purely Outta Rage… Then Before I Knew It I’m Cuffed And Getting Thrown In A Cage… Shit Got Me This Time..No Getting Off This Charge Wit A Warning… I’m Wishing It Was A Bad Dream, Hopin To Wake Up In The Morning… But Yo I Know What’s Going Down, I Know This Things For Real… I Deserve This Shit Man..Gotta Face Up To My Crime And Just Deal… Start Of My Sentence..One Year Seems Like A Long Time To Wait… But I’m A Keep Behavin Good..And Once I’m Out I’m Staying Straight… Locked Up Man..Like Some Claustrophobic Shit That Surrounds Me… I Only Been Here For One Day..So Much Shit Goin On Around Me… I Knew It Would Be Tough..Lucky I Got A Cell-Mate To Help Me Thru… Dude In For The Same Shit As Me..So I Know He Feels Just Like I Do… Stick Together Cuz There’s A Lot Of Guys Here Wantin To Start Shit… Gotta Keep Fightin Strong..Cuz My Cell-Mate Is Losin It Bit-By-Bit… I Don’t Think He Can Take The Loneliness..Shits Affecting His Mind… So I Try To Remind..Dawg You’ll Soon Be Out, Just Give It Some Time… It Hurts Me But I Hide It..Even With Friends In Here I Still Feel Lonely… I Think About My Family..Each Night I Pray They Won’t Disown Me… My Girl Lives In My Dreams..Her Smile Is What Keeps Me From Falling… The One Joy I Have In Here Is Visitations When She Comes A Calling… It’s 5 Months Into My Sentence And Finally I Hear Some Great News… I’m Gettin Out Of Here A Changed Man.. My Freedom I’ll Never Abuse… My Good Behaviour Done Paid Off..Gotta Go On Tag But That’s Cool… I’m Going Back To The Love Of My Family And My Main Prize Jewel… Seein My Girls Face When I Got Locked Up I Know I Caused Her Pain… But Yo I’m Out Now For Real..And I Ain’t Never Going Back Again… http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186443 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186428
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04-16-05, 07:13 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 5C7D 51FD
ay, not a bad peice at all homie...
story within the rhymes was solid an right on point, flow was top notch as ever, not much i can fault, pretty dope peace 7.5/10...keep the hotness comin, its L.S Fa life homie!
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04-16-05, 07:34 PM
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I Got Money In Tha Bank
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IP: 22C6 2F1A
i like it
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04-17-05, 12:03 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 9458 811B
.................*bump*........................
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04-18-05, 09:23 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: B3B9 F44A
yea man pretty hot piece, the flow was on ball, could do with some multies though, and a few metaphors here n there but respect to you it was a decent drop. peace
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