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Old 04-16-05, 12:45 PM   #1
mizz fyre
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Object Of Perfection......mizz fyre and esco

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Made-up girl, thinking she’s the definition of perfection
No direction, concerned only with maintaining peoples affection
Heart weighing heavy in her chest, she’s far from blessed
Testing death, hoping that her homies gon be impressed
So popular, pursuing victims, acts as a career
Coz well they get beat on, secretly hiding her own fears
And tears? Nah she can’t cry, every day she lives a lie
life so unstable and insecure, sometimes wishes to die
Chases dreams like a tiger chase butterflies, still fails
So materialistic, meaningful, expensive clothes, rings
Stuck where she’s at, can’t fly like a bird with no wings
Still expected to fix things, an object, feels like she used
Desired by others so vulnerable, so emotionally abused


Chorus


theirs girls that would kill for her kind of attention *2
No tension…if only their name could get a mention
But her preference is to be invisible, no longer exist
And so another one from the list is sadly missed….


Esco………..
knew this girl since pre-school, now she strivin for Perfection?
so down ta earth, hell she was eye candy, givin fellas Erections
it all started in sections, so here, lemme brake it down
grew up in the same town, she weighed like 120 pounds
claimed she was fat, an she needed a diet, i was like ''be quiet''
you look good ta me, an your adored by the rest of our school..
she said, ''my face, mind body an soul is ugly, so dont be a fool!''
parents raized her right, they thought there was nothin at all Wrong..
guess thats where they was Wrong, cause it was goin on for so Long..
started listnin ta gothic songs, an wearin nothin but Black
coverd her pretty complection in make up, mind wasnt on Track
it all ended so soon, i wish i could bring the old her Back
no more hunger, no more change, her seein her for who she really was, IN-Fact...
i dedicate this rap ta the one girl whos life is Missed
had the brightest future, that can only be loved an Remenicised!

Chorus


theirs girls that would kill for her kind of attention *2
No tension…if only their name could get a mention
But her preference is to be invisible, no longer exist
And so another one from the list is sadly missed….

(feed..................)
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Old 04-16-05, 12:50 PM   #2
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''(feed)..................''
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word, holla back...

Mizz was killin it with the flow

if yall dont leave feed on my part, just leave feed an give propps where its due....ta Mizz...holla back.
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Old 04-16-05, 01:14 PM   #3
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nice shit......................

vocab was tight..............flow and structure was on point..........i was feelin ya topic man sum gud shit...................8/10
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Old 04-16-05, 01:22 PM   #4
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thanks hommie!!!

uppin this for some outsiders oppinons (meanin not in L.S) but the fam still welcome obviously.....
ugh, whatever

uppin this here yall
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Old 04-16-05, 01:24 PM   #5
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^^^lol thanx solo..........up ya'll
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Old 04-17-05, 09:40 AM   #6
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up ya'll...............................
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Old 04-17-05, 04:02 PM   #7
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uppin this...

dont even act like yall gonna sleep on this
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Old 04-20-05, 05:22 AM   #8
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up ya'll...............
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Old 04-20-05, 06:55 AM   #9
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Mizz Fyre and esco callab......................................Puh... ..............
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Old 04-20-05, 07:12 AM   #10
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^^^hey what kind of feed is that?
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Old 04-20-05, 08:54 AM   #11
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Sup both verse's are pretty good Mizz went all hectic with the flow at
the end of her verse...

Esco come dope as well pretty decent colab..

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Old 04-20-05, 09:02 AM   #12
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^^^thanx alot crit much appreciated....................
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