Voted For: Ethnic

Ethnic have pretty good punches in his verse........
mizz fyres verse is too big......
mizz fyre dont have very good punches in my mind.....
Ethnics verse is pretty good long....
Everytime you do not have to get all off lines up...........
MY VOTE:Ethnic

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Voted For: mizz fyre

i think mizz fyre won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
ethnic u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were pretty good

favorite mizz fyre lines:
Wrong place, wrong time, cops arrive and he’s the one blamed
Witnesses say he did it, he was innocent, or so he claimed

Was he framed, guy stood in front of a jury, telling his story
Enemies wishing for this moment, were looking on with glory
Couldn’t decide so the judges adjourned to discuss it further
Came back later, made an announcement guys guilty of murder

favorite ethnic lines:
everyone and stole their pictures,
desert eagle play and ak-47 sing for these creatures,
whose make features........
we dont get funeal,not even grave,
look this man he was so brave, noone regonize,
not even know his name.....
...

return the favor
link in sig

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decent drop babygirl
you killin it again shorty

deep stuff, u got this in the bag!

uppin

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^^^^thanx............up ya'll..........................

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Voted For: mizz fyre

vote mizz fyre.

emotion myrical content and imagery took it for her in this one.

flow is good because of good bar length. plus it is more on topic than her competitors drop.

one sided really.
good drop.
return the favour in my battle against intesify effect please.

^^^thanx ya'll........................uppppppppppppppppppin

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Voted For: mizz fyre

I'm not going to quote lines...this was fairly one-sided...

mizz fyre- You've got a talent for lead-ins, no doubt about that....your intro connected nicely with the rising actions, nice vocab, but I'm more impressed by your storytelling ability..

Ethnic- Complexity wasn't there, neither was any real kind of story or substance for that matter...even you got to admit you got reamed on this one..

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